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Opinion needed! I take part in Blogging 201 and write daily posts about my progress in this challenge. Would you read these posts even if you don’t participate in Blogging 201? I try to make the posts of general interest, such as here http://maraeastern.com/2014/04/26/blogging-201-day-twelve/, but does it work?
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Mara, this definitely works! I love polls. I recently tried one to get some feedback about teenagers and high school subjects. You definitely are witty. I like your writing style — wish I had a knack for writing shorter, witter sentences. Keep up the good work! : ))
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Thank you a lot for your feedback, it means a lot! I’m glad I didn’t bore you to death đŸ˜‰ Happy blogging to you!
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I enjoyed your 365 photos deal…and you are not a bad photographer, give yourself more credit. Well organized, nice clean look and feel on your blog…I haven’t made it to 201 yet đŸ™‚
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Oh, thank you, you’re too kind! When you’re ready for 201, give it a shot, it’s very helpful đŸ™‚
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I will Mara for sure!
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Hi all! This is my favourite post from this week… It’s all about things that I’m not sorry for…
http://suzie81speaks.com/2014/04/26/sorry-im-not-sorry/
I’d love you guys to check it out and let me know what you think! Hope you’re having a good weekend!
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I love the subject and I love your take on it! Especially the sentence: “Posting pictures of my cats on my Facebook page. I have to look at pictures of my friends children.” YES!
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Thank you!
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Hi Suzie! The only real recommendation is when you are referring to the post that inspired you up near the top is to put the link to it there. (I personally would link the words to it).
Great post! đŸ˜€
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Thank you!
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Nice post Suzie. I think you made your point clear. While I don’t share your penchant for long baths or Dolph Lungren, I found it amusing how you unapologetically stated your case. In fact, the subtle hint of humor is something I try to incorporate in all my posts (hopefully) to my readers’ delight
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Thank you very much! Very much appreciated!
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Thanks. And if you have the chance to give me some feedback on my blog I’d appreciate it too.
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I love it! Now following!
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Thanks!
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Suzie:
You do not have a Right to live the way you wish to live. People assuming a right that they do not own is what has gotten our planet into the sorry state it is in. You have a right and an obligation to live with other’s in a state of harmony and mutually
beneficial trade relations. By way of example, kitten’s are not needed to replicate our species, babies on the hand ( at least
occasional ones) are needed. To compare your enjoyment of kitten photos with your friend’s baby photos, well you know where I’m
going with this.
Love Peace and Happiness, and I hope you do the same for me.
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I have to respectfully disagree with your entire comment, but thank you very much for taking the time to write it… All the best!
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Hi – I really liked your blog – very honest and candid. It’s also a great concept – we should not apologise for what we think and feel about things – I may just do a post on it this week! I think your writing is refreshing and witty.
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Thank you very much!
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Well done! Really enjoyed! Also liked the theme and overall look of your blog. Keep ’em coming đŸ™‚
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Hey, I decided to modify the content of my blog and I would like to know if I’m taking a risk: http://thehighheeledpapergirl.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/cheers-to-a-fresh-start/
Plus, I’d like to start a new project: a collaborative blog. Check out https://wordpress.com/forums/topic/collaborative-blog?replies=1#post-1769149 if you’re interested.
Thanks! đŸ™‚
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You should make the change if you’re decided that it’s for you. I definitely wouldn’t delete any of your previous blog posts though, variety is ok and it’s also ok that a blog is evolving!
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Alright, thanks for the advice!
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I don’t see where you’re taking a risk. If fashion is your passion (pardon the rhyme) then anyone who follows you will have the same one as well. Best wishes
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Hey everybody!
Posted these Shenanigans last night, and wanted to know if everyone thought of the shenanigans? Maybe some suggestions on how to up the shenanigans level for next time?
This will only apply if you enjoy shenanigans. I also have a “Tomfoolery” category on my blog which I’d love some input on.
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Hahahahahah. Left a comment at your site too.
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Woot! Thanks momasteblog! I really appreciate it. And I like your eyes and your smile. You like, lit up the room and stuff. đŸ™‚
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Aw. Shucks. Swim on over and check me out sometime!
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Just. Awesome. Now following!
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Woot! Forgot to say thanks for the follow, Blue Eyes.
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You’re welcome, although I have an urge to sing My Way now…
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I have blue eyes too, Suzie.
You probably can’t tell from my (current) profile picture, ’cause I’m trying to my best to look cool with my “Clint Eastwood Stare” and shit.
PS – I don’t mind that you have a feller. We can still go out and do some of the latest dance drug. Mojitos, wasn’t it?
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Haha! It might be a bit difficult if you live in Canada, but thanks!
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Oh, and yes – I am on Twitter.
@OffensivePBook
Follow me, and I’ll be sure to follow you back tomorrow (ahem) in 4 hours, when I’ve had about three hours of sleep and am in my cubical, guzzling coffee, administering “Clear Eyes” drops and trying to look like I care about my real job.
Ever seen Office Space?
Yeah…that.
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Office Space? http://suzie81speaks.com/2014/04/16/die-printer-die/
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Are you on Twitter?
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Whups – replied to this in another post.
Still – for you and anyone else reading, it’s @OffensivePBook
Follow me, ’cause like, I’m kind of the best.
AndrewWK, a certified rock star, followed me earlier today, so…yeah.
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Do it.
I’m not a big Sinatra fan, but…I do like things my way.
…and send a video, Blue Eyes. đŸ˜‰
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I love shenanigans especially when they involve sarcasm and smart ass đŸ™‚
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Hey, thanks Sarah! đŸ˜€
I’m a big fan of Shenanigans too! But ONLY if they’re cheeky and fun.
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I’ve tried to unsubscribe because I get too many of these emails per day but I’m still getting them. Unsubscribe me please.
Sent from my iPhone Co-Creative Health Solutions 778-788-4325 cchs@shaw.ca http://www.co-creative-health-solutions.com
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You should be able to fix that in the settings of the blogs you follow and how frequently you get (if at all) msgs at all.
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http://chanceburton.wordpress.com/
Let me know what you think about it. I’m putting a lot of time and effort into it. I would appreciate it a lot!
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It looks good! And that’s a huge compliment by a person who doesn’t care a bit about men’s fashion đŸ˜‰
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Ah, thank you very much Mara. I’m new to blogging, started last week, so it’s great with some compliments!
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I like your blog, I love that you include loads of images and have videos on your blog and there is not a lot of writing. It makes your blog more interactive and engaging for me.
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Thanks, that’s also what I’m going for. A little background story and then you can see the collection for example đŸ™‚
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Looks good to me. The time and effort shows.
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Thanks a lot Ben, I appreciate it!
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Hi everyone, I hope your doing great! I have recently published one motivational post and I would love it if you guys read it.
http://auguest31.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/love/
I like writing such motivational stuff, so just like if you actually like it đŸ™‚ and stay tuned for new ones.
love ya!
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You blog is simply lovely! I love the warm soft colours and the design in general, and the content you have of course. You’re doing a great job!
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ohh thank you so much. Your feedback means a lot to me. :*
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Definitely an upbuilding post. I gave myself a hug after reading it đŸ™‚
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I’m sure you deserve one đŸ™‚
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Thanks
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I love the autumn colors of the blog too. About the content, yes, I agree. Whitney Houston was right: Learning to love yourself is the greatest love of all.
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Rock star Bono says he believes Jesus is The Son of God! Weird! http://wp.me/p1MlsC-Kw
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Hey guys
I started a blog today because I’ve been thinking for a while about writing a book or essays about some of the things I’ve been through with a little bit of my imagination and opinions.
But as you all know, starting a book from scratch is a little bit hard specially for someone without the required education or experience, which is why i though that i can start with a blog and see if it goes well with the reader then i can develop it later into a book.
I would like to know what you guys think about this and give me your opinion about my first try.
thanks and good luck to all
salvadorious.wordpress.com
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The headline is striking but the format of dense reams of text may become dull without something to break it up. Try including some images in the posts and a good header. Also, use the “more” tag after the first paragraph for each post.
Otherwise it is coming along quite nicely!
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thank you for your comments, i appreciate it.
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If I may suggest some constructive criticism. There’s too much exposition in the beginning. You don’t have to reveal everything about your characters right from the start–they can be fleshed out as you go. Also, a rule of thumb is to SHOW not TELL the reader as many details as possible. For instance, instead of TELLING us that Brian works at the same place as Amanda, have them speak to each other, when one can say “I didn’t see you at work the other day” thereby SHOWING the audience that they work together without directly stating it. In my young adult novel I have dialogue right from the first line, and that is designed to entice the reader to keep reading
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thank you so much and i do appreciate the constructive criticism.
I’ll be working on your comments and hopefully will see improvements soon.
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Great advice, Ben đŸ™‚
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Like it,
A must header needed.. Also just like your last post put some pictures in the previous ones.. Love your writing though.. Don’t you think an about page should be there? Something which tells about you and why you started this blog..? The rest is pretty cool..
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The blog looks nice, well done…my two cents/question, beside that I agree with everyone who stopped by here before: should you have a clear distinction between essays and book? Also, the title above SALVADORIOUS says the blog is clearly about you…I thought it was about the book/essays?
The beauty of blogs is that it’s always a work in progress and I look forward to keep reading what you do…best of luck!
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Thank you for ur comments and as you can tell I am still less than a week old so I still need to figure out what I want and how use word press properly. Thank you! Best of luck to you too
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New page to drive people to old content
. It has my LGBT focus, but what do you think, technically?
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Hi! I checked the page and here are a few comments! I feel a little overwhelmed by the colors and the fonts. I would probably use a grey or black color for the general text and color only for the fonts. I really like the images. I think the links are well-placed in the text, which is written organically! It will work to showcase past work in my opinion!
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Thank you. The formatting was fiddly; I will experiment on a draft.
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Absolutely loved your blog, but I would agree with Marie-Pierre…the look of it is a bit overwhelming…colors, fonts, background clash and make it a little harder to follow…content is amazing though, well written, open, honest…truly looking forward to reading more as you really connect with your audience. All the best!
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Thank you for following. I have changed it: I stopped using Brush Script MT, which I find pretty but which got no positive feedback, and used the largest font I can in my theme, “Heading 1”. Formatting it is a lot less fiddly. I feel it needs print larger than the normal font for the theme Nishita. An improvement?
Thank you for following. Welcome. I like to establish blogging friendships, reciprocally following and commenting. I have a few thought-provoking commenters. Comment, and I will comment back!
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Much improved! Much much much easier to read and follow! I would consider the background color/pix…right now it’s a bit bright and makes it a little hard to focus on writing, but it’s a preference naturally.
It is my pleasure and look forward to reading your posts!
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And I wanted to show off my video selfie.
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Would like feedback on About page and writing style.
raggedbutterfly.com
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I like your About page, I think it goes well with the rest of the content of your blog đŸ™‚
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Thank you so much for taking the time out to look at my blog. I really appreciate it! đŸ™‚
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Wow, your blog is aesthetically one of the best I’ve seen – it’s gorgeous!
Your about page is good – short and snappy, covering relevant information without being too self-aggrandising or too vague.
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Thanks so much for taking the time to check my blog out and for the feedback! đŸ™‚ It took me some time to find the right theme, and so far this is the best I’ve seen for clean lines & readability.
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I liked it! I particularly liked that you gave reasons for someone to read your blog. As someone with a limited following I’m considering incorporating that into my own About Page
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Thanks so much for checking it out! I learned that little trick from my research on “How to write a good About page.” I guess it worked!
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Thanks. And if you have the chance to give me some feedback on my blog I’d appreciate it too.
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I see that you may be attempting something similar to what I am doing. I made a Titles Page that I will organize one day so the flow of the story can easily be accessible. Tell me what you think. grimbaldptalmuss.wordpress.com
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I love the sound of your blog and content. The ragged butterfly is so symbolic!
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Well done! You set up the tone right off the bat, it’s clear where you are going, well written, to the point…very classy and you really open your world to us…looking forward to more!
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Thanks for the great feedback, and for the follow! đŸ™‚ I followed you, and looking forward to reading.
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Thank you Holly!!
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i just want people to know me so i have chosen to show case my blog.. plzz chek it out…
http://www.aimanpeer.wordpress.com
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I’m new to the blogging world and would love to know how I’m doing.
Any comments related to the appearance or content of my blog would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks so much!
http://amforte66.wordpress.com/category/family/
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I have no actual suggestions for you, this is just to let you know that I love your theme and what you did with it, it looks very nice đŸ˜‰
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Visually and format wise it is both attractive and engaging. I have no suggestions to improve it đŸ™‚
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I like your blog, very well presented and I find it engaging and a joy to read đŸ˜€
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Looks good to me
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Loved the blog about the “vintage” ways in which we had to get through school and our assignments. Consider me a new follower I look forward to being entertained đŸ™‚
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Looks, very clean, easy to follow, well written, good mix of witty and serious. I think most people could relate to, for example, to your post on things you and your husband have fought about…Looking forward to keep reading!
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Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. đŸ™‚
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Hey all! I’d love some feedback on the layout and content of my blog. Does it speak to a variety of age groups? Is it relatable? Thanks so much, it’s Community Pool that often gives me the very best feedback đŸ™‚
http://neverstationary.wordpress.com/
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The blog looks very vivid and lively, but it probably won’t be for me, the moving images are too harsh on my eyes… I love the animated image of the daisy though, this one is not moving too much đŸ˜‰
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Hi catdiggedydog,
I like the content of your blog, and at least that latest post is relatable for a lot of people. I’m not so sure what age groups you’re talking about….between what ages?
As to the layout of your blog: to be honest, it isn’t the most exciting, but your words are really what will keep someone interested and coming back, and i think you’ve accomplished that.
Aul
By the way, I’m writing a book and want to get the word out. Please check out my blog at http://montairyus23.wordpress.com/
Thanks!
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I’ll totally check out your blog! Thanks for responding to my questions!! I was just wondering because I’m a high school senior and sometimes my experiences and reflections can be a little rudimentary.
I decided the layout of the blog simply for that reason, that the words would be the main focus. I like minimalist themes đŸ™‚ Thanks again! – Catherine
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You’re welcome!
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Hi Catherine, I took a look at your blog. The content is good, the format is great. I went straight to the “About” page as most people do but I feel that is a bit messy. It could be shorter and more succinct and I lost interest in it. I see you cover a variety of things.
I would suggest:
* Remove the “How I write my posts” and “When inspiration strikes” or at least combine those two into “Why I love writing”
* Put the extra curriculars on a separate page
* My favourite book doesn’t really belong on an about page – you may want to write a blog post about it, or a separate page for favourite books
Otherwise, I’m not the target audience but it is a nice site!
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That actually makes a ton of sense, I’ll definitely be doing that. Thanks so much!
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I liked the layout and cosmetic nature of your blog. I thought it had a good flow and you do well with keeping your content and verbiage mature enough for different age groups!
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I just changed my theme on my blog. It was From Dawn to Dusk and now it’s Natisha. I like the change and was ready for it. It’s 11:30 now. I am conflicted about the current header I have up. It’s a little formal. I struggle to stay on topic with my blog. Any suggestions?
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Actually I like the header, it’s appealing and draws attention to your blog! đŸ™‚
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Thanks! I found the pic on another blog and I followed but forgot to link to it and give credit so I missed out on a pingback there.
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I’m new at blogging and writing. I too would like to know about writing style and overcoming
writers block.
http://caseylove1985.wordpress.com/
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Hi caseylove1985,
All I can say about writer’s block is don’t think too much about it. If you’re having trouble writing about something in particular, write about something else instead. I don’t advise that you stop writing, however. A short break can be useful, but don’t estrange yourself from writing.
As to your writing style: just proofread a bit more to make sure your sentences flow and make sense, along with considering your word choice. It happens to everyone in which you miss something, but proofreading is important. I hope this was helpful!
By the way, I’m writing a novel and want to get the word out. Please visit my blog http://montairyus23.wordpress.com/
Thanks!
Aul
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This was very helpful, thanks for taking the time to reply.
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You’re welcome. Thanks for the follow!
Aul
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Hi Casey. Writing style is a personal thing and is like comparing apples to oranges–just a matter of taste so long as the spelling and grammar doesn’t detract from your narrative. As an amateur photographer myself (specializing in travel photography as a look at my blog would reveal) I can relate to your interests.
Regarding writer’s block, I find it effective to consider a main theme and then write posts on various aspects. For example, you mention growing up in Philly. You could do a series on what school was like, summer vacations, your favorite sites, all under the same heading. Then when that’s exhausted move on to the next. Best wishes and I hope this helps
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I liked it and added you to my reading list đŸ™‚
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Opinions will be appreciated http://www.anamikadutta.wordpress.com
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Looks lovely! But the text in the sidebar is hard to read owing to the background that you picked. Maybe a different background would be better in this respect?
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Right, changing right now đŸ™‚
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Hi Anamika. I too found the text on the sidebar hard to read with the background. I think the background image is really nice, so I’d change the text color if possible. Also, your About Me page doesn’t tell the potential reader/follower much about you. Perhaps you can flesh it out?
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Sure will đŸ™‚
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Thanks. And if you have the chance to give me some feedback on my blog I’d appreciate it too.
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I loved your blog, especially the pictures. Was inspired too. Keep up the good work (:
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I love the layout and the title and cover photo are great. Very visually pleasing!
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Thank you (:
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Hi guys, do you like motivational stories, that may change your life to better? You can find me on my new blog
http://beupbeat.wordpress.com/
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just wondering what people think of this type of post layout. http://thinkingdiagonally.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/stranger-profiles/
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I really liked it! The way you explained everything made you feel all the write emotions, and I was absorbed the whole time.
By the way, please check out my blog at http://montairyus23.wordpress.com/ I’m writing a novel and want to get the word out. Thanks!
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Awesome, as practically all your posts. A great idea, keep it coming!
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Your post was really interesting. Especially the way you described the taxi driver. ‘Like me.’ had an impact. It’s interesting how one can get to know about a lot of things through a random conversation đŸ™‚
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The only suggestion I’d make is the style is a bit bland (especially if you’re thinking diagonally đŸ˜‰ Perhaps a jazzier style might be more befitting, but overall nice job
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Hello people đŸ™‚
I started a new series on my blog called Coffee conversations!
It is all about addressing people’s queries they send in through their mails.
Here’s the link-http://thatindianminimalist.wordpress.com/2014/04/23/lovemoves/
Would love a feedback on this post and the blog. đŸ™‚
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Hey Hardik Nagar! (Is that your real name? It can’t be. Can it? Either way, it’s awesome.)
Do you think you could repost the link so I can click it? I’m a busy man. I look forward to checking out your blog! đŸ˜€
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Hahah, it is my real name. India is a funny country, name wise. Thank you!
Yes sure- http://thatindianminimalist.wordpress.com
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I would like any and all feedback on my blog please. I want to be sure if what I’m writing is actually any good and would appreciate any comments you may have. Also I’ve recently changed the layout and theme of my blog and I’m wondering what people think. Thanks http://ginge1996.wordpress.com/
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“Good” is a relative term. I think your style plays well to what I perceive is your target audience. I like the block letters in your header like it was an old Nintendo game (or at least that’s how it came across to me).
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That’s exactly what I was going for with the header. A lot of my posts tend to be about gaming in some way and so I was trying to emulate that with the header. Thanks for your feedback it’s appreciated.
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Thanks. And if you have the chance to give me some feedback on my blog I’d appreciate it too.
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I like it. Your sophisticated language goes well with the topic of travel and the places you’ve been. It’s a nice layout too, a good blog in my eyes.
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Hello –
My blog is Creo Somnium, latin for Create and Dream. http://didntjustwakeup.wordpress.com
I intend for this blog to be one that inspires people, that generates creativity within them. Do you think it does that? Does it do it for you? What would it need for that?
Additionally, Does the layout help or harm this mission? Furthermore, what might help encourage involvement from other bloggers i.e. comments.
Thank you very much – Sahara
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Loved your about me section it made me đŸ™‚ and I love creativity. I will see you in my reader feed!
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OMG, I always got the question if I was Sarah Lee. (I’m Kathryn.) Did you get razzed about the dessert line: Sara Lee? I even got a bit of that!
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Holy hell did I ever! I still get that line at my age now and I am sure the look on my face is that of “really loser how original of you” LOL đŸ™‚
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Yeah. When people sing to me “Sarah Smile” or the Starship song I’m like, “Thank God I’ve never heard that before!”
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Haha lucky girl!
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Hello people đŸ™‚
I started a new series on my blog called Coffee conversations!
It is all about addressing people’s queries they send in through their mails.
Here’s the link-
http://thatindianminimalist.wordpress.com/2014/04/23/lovemoves/
Would love a feedback on this post and the blog. đŸ™‚
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Karan has some competition in coffee conversations! Yours has less gossip and more useful advice! I liked reading the post, although I felt like I was scrolling down for an eternity. I know many people like reading separate sentences but I am a fan of paragraphs. Overall very well done!
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Oh! I need an opinion on another one! I did this last weekend, you see, and I titled it, “My Parents Told Me I ‘Ruined Easter.'”
Now, don’t get me wrong, I think I ruined Easter pretty damn good, but…NEXT year? Next year I’d like to know how to ruin it a little better, you know? Just like, comment on the post itself with your suggestions (if you care to bother, that is – no pressure), and I swear to the Easter Bunny, I’ll implement your ideas in 2015 if they’re any good. đŸ™‚
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Why would you want I ruin Easter?
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Well, one of Jesus’s commandments when he stood atop Mount Olympus with his tablets, was to find ways to disrupt the “False Idol” that is the cursed Easter Bunny with “Graven Images,” was it not?
…wait, was it not?
I’ve got to Google that.
BRB
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What the hell, can you explain that please?
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I’m sorry, I cannot.
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dude, he’s taking the piss.
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I’m a girl god, and lol I know
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ah, sorry, girl god đŸ˜‰ I’ll do some worshiping pronto.
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Shut the fuck up you ass hole. Why don’t you get a life
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Hello everyone! I’d love it if you could check out my blog and let me know what you think of it.
http://www.janhavikulkarni.wordpress.com
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I like the concept of “lessons” that you have there đŸ™‚
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Thanks so much đŸ™‚
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I agree with Mara Eastern: the idea of lessons is a cool concept, and although the lessons are short, they’re easy to remember and can stick with you. đŸ™‚
Aul
By the way, Ii’m writing a book and want to get the word out. Please check out my blog http://montairyus23.wordpress.com/
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*I’m
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Thank you! Yes, I’ll definitely check out your blog đŸ™‚
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You’re welcome! Thanks for the follow!
Aul
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Likewise đŸ™‚
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The lessons are good, but a potential reader isn’t getting much more than a sentence or two for their attention. Perhaps meatier posts will draw more readers
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Thank you! I’ll keep that in mind for my future posts.
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Hey everyone! My latest post “Living in the moment” and how writers try to capture the world in a sentence. http://wp.me/p4behQ-6t
Would love to know what you think! (oh and maybe check out my other posts too while you’re at it.) đŸ™‚
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Nice post. I think we all (meaning bloggers) can relate to the difficulty in capturing something so intangible as a “moment”
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Glad you liked it! đŸ™‚
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Thanks. And if you have the chance to give me some feedback on my blog I’d appreciate it too.
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Just saw you visited India. Awesome posts! đŸ™‚
P.S. Following you now.
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Much obliged
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Please check out my Flash Fiction feature on my blog. Every week I use a sentence submitted by a reader as the first line of a short story. Thank you for reading! http://kristineriddle.wordpress.com/2014/04/25/flash-fiction-friday-the-break-up/
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Thanks for sharing with us! Reading over the stories and the responses, I could feel the energy rumbling between you, the writer, and your readers! It’s awesome and inspiring to me!
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That’s great to hear. Thank you for taking the time to read and to offer your opinions to me. I really appreciate it. đŸ™‚
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Hey đŸ™‚
Are there any How I Met Your Mother fans around here? Did anyone like the ending? I bet majority of you all didn’t. Here are my opinions on why the finale totally destroyed the series. Do tell your views too.
Thanks.
http://themoonshaker.wordpress.com/2014/04/27/4-reasons-why-himyms-ending-destroyed-the-series/
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Hello everyone! This is my first jump into the Community Pool. . . I write a mixed blog of mommy stuff/poetry/Buddhism. I’m wondering specifically if anyone has any tips on formatting poetry on WordPress. I can’t seem to make it single-spaced, so it ends up looking all choppy. Also, when I open the poems in my smartphone app, the lines and spacing are all messed up. Thanks in advance for any comments!
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This should help you with formatting poetry: https://wordpress.com/support/editors/styling-individual-posts-and-pages/
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It took me time to find a theme that stayed true as viewed on different devices. I like the Hemingway theme. http://grimbaldptalmuss.wordpress.com/
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Where are you writing the poems?
I suggest copying them from Notepad, because it keeps the formatting you assign it there.
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Umm yeah, I need help with everything, thanks, umm just tell me what I can do to improve, thanks for the help
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