Writing Challenge: the Devil is in the Details

For some of us, blogging is personal. Others are trying to educate or entertain; many more are hybrids. Yet we’re all storytellers. Creative Writing Challenges help you to push your writing boundaries, show off your blogging chops, and, hopefully, spark more post ideas.

To participate, tag your post with DPchallenge or leave a link to it in the comments. (It would also be great if you could link to this post to encourage people to take part – the more the merrier!)  Your post should be specifically written in response to this challenge. We’ll keep an eye on the tag and highlight some of our favorite posts on Freshly Pressed on Friday.

No matter what you’re writing, whether it’s longform non-fiction essays, poems, short stories, novels, or memoirs, your powers of observation are critical to creating a scene in the reader’s mind, setting tone, and evoking the mood that helps to tell the story.

For example, you could write: “The dog ran across the street.” Every reader will picture a different dog and a different street in their mind. If you write: “The small, black, three-legged Chihuahua darted under a red Ford Focus and hopped across the wet cobblestone alley,” you create a more concrete picture in the reader’s mind. We can imagine a tiny dog, see it disappear briefly under a newer model red car, and follow it in our mind’s eye as it makes its way down the cobbles.

Let’s look at another example. You could write, “The man walked into a bar.” Or, you could describe the man more specifically as you imagine him in the scene, or document what you observe if the man is right before you: “The short, bearded man with red hair and Buddy Holly-style glasses strolled into the smoke-filled honky tonk and sat on an ancient wooden stool at the bar, the sound of peanut shells crunching under his boots.”

Each detail is like the stroke of a brush on blank canvas, filling in detail and completing the picture in the reader’s mind.

Your challenge this week is to practice your powers of observation. Take any person, place, or event, and write three paragraphs describing your subject in great detail. Here are three scenes to get you thinking — feel welcome to choose one or more of these scenes and riff off of it, or create your own:

1. A woman walks into a restaurant. Imagine this scene and capture every detail you can in a few paragraphs. Describe the woman: is she old, young, or in-between? What type of restaurant is it: fancy, casual, or a diner? What is she doing? Pack as much detail as you can into a few paragraphs that will help us imagine this woman clearly.

2. A boy plays in his front yard. You have three paragraphs to help us imagine this boy. What country are we in? Which details help communicate this? Is there an elm tree or an olive tree in his yard? Maybe there is no tree at all. How old is this boy? What color is his hair? What is he wearing? You get the idea.

3. Describe your writing space. Do you write on the couch? At the kitchen table? At a desk? In a restaurant? Describe your surroundings. What does it smell like? What is the light like in your space? What can you hear, feel, and see? You have three paragraphs to pull us into your space. Go.

As always, show your work: tag your post with DPchallenge.

Note that practicing observation is a great way to keep your imagination vivid and your descriptive powers sharp. You can choose any scene in the world and describe it in detail as a warm up to your writing projects. It’s a great way to bust writer’s block and ease into your writing goal for the day.

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  1. Interesting… I might try one of the prompts.
    I think its quite a good idea, especially that to choose scene and describe it as warm up…


  2. Hmmm I failed miserably in English but my imagination has always fired on 16 cylinders. Like the Bugatti Super Sport, my “mind’s eye” races through a maze of neurons that mimic the 24hrs of Lemons. With sleek turbo charged contours and music for fuel I accept your challenge.


    1. That’s how I feel. It’s those finer details that make the story, or anecdote, more believable. I’m just not much for writing stories that never happened. I must give this one a try this week.


  3. I discuss with other writers about how to show details in stories a lot. This is a great post and provides excellent inspiration for everyone! Thanks!


  4. Reblogged this on Content Unknown and commented:
    Well this sounds interesting….

    I spent a lot of time reading up on how to improve academic writing before I started writing my thesis. It seemed that quite a few sources extolled the virtues of writing beyond the bounds of the academic arena (particularly in the form of free writing). I tried free-writing for a while, but the idea of fiction writing has long been of interest to me. I was therefore very intrigued by the following post I just stumbled across; designed to help people develop “the art and craft of blogging”. So for anyone who has an interest in developing their writing (of any variety) and a few minutes to spare for the cause why not read the following blog (see below) and give this short fun writing challenge a try. I will post my response to the writing challenge at a more humane time tomorrow.



    1. Hi @sandraconner — all posts here on the Daily Post have comments set to close automatically two weeks after publication. Did you see a post that closed before then?


      1. Yes, the post that went up dated January 20th said “Comments Closed” on the evening of the 20th when I went to post a link. I don’t usually have much time to take part in these challenges, but I wanted to start participating as much as possible, and that was the first one I’d done. It could be that it was a fluke, and that all the others have stayed open. I admit I just decided to put my attention elsewhere when I saw that it was closed so soon. I thought perhaps I’d misunderstood. But then I saw the invitation to post links again in the new challenge yesterday, and that’s when I commented about it. But if that’s not the norm, then I’ll try again another time.


  5. Writing itself demands great attention to detail that I believe it is an exercise reserved for those who can be mindful of so many things. Let’s set aside the things, the people, the atmosphere, the activities or lack thereof that you want to write about and think about how many things you have to worry about already just writing — your tenses, the nuances attached to your choice of words, the transition and flow, subject-verb agreement, spelling, punctuation, etc.


  6. its a real challenge. .. for someone who seldom write something how to describe, it will be little bit difficult. but as a blogger, all should be easy to tell.


  7. Krista, thanks for the challenge.

    What a solid opportunity to work on the art of writing. I started brainstorming with sentences like “There is a desk” and “It smells good” and ended up with something so beautifully descriptive. I decided to respond to your prompt on my writing space. I also encouraged my readers to take a stab at the challenge themselves.

    Here’s the final product:


    1. Dude … I was just about to call it the night when I decided to read your story Nooooooo This was undoubtedly a tearjerker read. I say that because I once loved with a love that was more than love -E.A.P ;) Good read dude!


  8. I love this post. I’ve been writing scenes as a way to warm up my brain for years. It helps get the wheels turning and the engine primed to process imagery into words. Might just have to take the challenge and post a scene. Interesting. Thanks for posting this :-)


    1. Writing scenes is a *great* way to warm up to your current writing project. I’d recommend it as an exercise — even just a few sentences or a paragraph — to shake off your critical left brain and allow the good stuff to start flowing.


  9. I don’t mean to be all ‘grumpy pants,’ but wasn’t this challenge to write just THREE paragraphs? I couldn’t help but notice that two of the FP’d posts were longer. They were great, but I think the brevity of the writing challenge was an important aspect of it.


    1. @kylie First off, great entry into the challenge! You had me at “all the other boys had shirts with the alligator,” which transported me right back to the 80s.

      The beauty of this writing challenge and any other we publish is that writers can approach it in the way that suits them best. The true purpose of the challenges is to encourage participants to write. Three paragraphs was what I’d mentioned as part of the challenge, though participants can choose to write as much or as little as they wish.