Did you know that it matters where in a sentence you place that helpful adverb “only”? Consider this sentence:
Johnny only eats pickle pancakes on Saturdays.
The author of such a sentence almost certainly means that the only day on which Johnny eats pickle pancakes is Saturday, but the sentence actually can be (in fact the syntax requires that it be) read to mean that the only thing Johnny does on Saturdays is to eat pickle pancakes.
To convey the actual meaning, the sentence might read as follows:
Johnny eats pickle pancakes only on Saturdays.
But that sentence seems awfully formal, and in fact, it’s only a hair less ambiguous, as the “only” could still describe Johnny’s steadfast appetite rather than his timing. That is, the sentence “Johnny eats pickle pancakes only” makes sense and still means basically the same thing as the original troubling sentence. So, the clearest way to write the sentence with the desired meaning is as follows:
Johnny eats pickle pancakes on Saturdays only.
If the second variant seems formal, this last is downright stodgy, reading like something you’d find in a grammar primer from the 1950s.
Of course, in a sentence as ludicrous as this, it’s pretty clear what information the author wishes to convey. If Johnny does nothing all day on Saturdays but eat pickle pancakes, he probably wakes up a very sick boy on Sundays, if he wakes up at all. But sometimes the language really matters. I can imagine poorly written sentences causing contention when occurring in legal documents, for example.
So, a rule of thumb when using “only”: place it as close as possible to the thing it modifies. I think it’s generally better to place it before a noun and after a verb (depending on which it’s modifying). If you’re writing something fairly informal, you can of course be more flexible, but if you’re writing something that requires fine-tuned meaning, you should be careful where you place that tiny and easily-misplaced “only.”
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I think I would revert to the passive voice and write that, “Saturdays are the only days that Johnny eats pickle pancakes.” (Presumably followed up by, “The rest of the week, he leaves out the pickles.”)
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You just took my right back to Grammar for Journalism.
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Reblogged this on 13senseperminute and commented:
damn adherents
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“The only day on which Johnny eats pickle pancakes is Saturday.” And really, he shouldn’t even eat them then. I mean yuck. Seriously.
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quite a thing for the day…its all in the grammar. but then i must ask, whats the intention of this?
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Thank you so much, I found that to be very informative.
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Also could read, if a comma is placed after only, that of all involved, only Johnny eats pickle pancakes on Saturday(s). I believe the premise is that of the oddity of this behavior, 😀
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Wow. Thank you for a good lesson in the use of the word “only.”
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Thanks for the info. 🙂
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By this article , you show we don’t pay attention to the sense of words, sentences.
Everybody talk about this way and you follow.
Thank you for this grammar lesson .
Given that I am French, It is good to improve my english.
Nina
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In situations like this, the best way to avoid ambiguity is to rephrase the sentence:
The only day that Johnny eats pickle pancakes is Saturday. (or)
Saturday is the only day that Johnny eats pickle pancakes.
or
The only thing Johnny does on Saturday is eat pickle pancakes.
or
Johnny is the only one who eats pickle pancakes on Saturday.
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I love these posts about grammar and style!
Very few people (even educated ones!) seem to care about proper usage! Kudos to you, for addressing these issues .
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I thought English was easy.
It’s awfully hard. 😦
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Only could be a great tool for comedic writing, I’ll keep that in mind for future posting when my brain is a little less fried. Something very witty could be written with only.
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10-4 good buddy. I rarely use this word: however, I shall be diligent in my strategic deployment of the word only. Happy New Year.
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It`s only a word 🙂
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If only I had read this earlier!
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If Johnny choked on the pickle every other Saturday and was saved by his step-grandmother, who was a former NFL quarterback, and the first and only quarterback to play football in the 1960’s…This might be of interest. However, you took the time to write it, I learned a little bit, and so it wasn’t totally worthless. Might I suggest telling story’s if you’re going to teach? Don’t listen to me, of course, I’m just a girl with piercings and tattoo’s, A.D.D and an IQ of 168. God bless you my little, Daryl.
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Right there is my dyslexic confusion.
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That was good food for thought for a few minutes…
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