Today, we challenge you to create a compelling setting for your story.
In the world of storytelling, setting refers to the time and place in which a story happens. For example, Charles Dickens’ Oliver Twist takes place in 19th century England. One of my all-time favorite novels, Caught, by Lisa Moore, takes place in 1970s Newfoundland. Where and when does your favorite novel unfold?
Droids? On the Farm?
Every story would be another story, and unrecognizable as art, if it took up its character and plot and happened somewhere else.
– Eudora Welty
Consider this: what if Charlotte’s Web was set in the future in a galaxy far far away as opposed to an idyllic farm? What if Star Wars‘ C-3PO and R2D2 were rolling about the Zuckerman farm in 1950s America trying to evade the Empire’s forces?
These might make for interesting variations, though the dissonance in these sample setting variations can make your head spin. Appropriate settings augment a story, conferring it with gravity, while inappropriate settings can simply confuse readers. Today, we challenge you to write a setting into the scene of your choice.
Sweat the details: creating a strong setting
There are two ways to participate in the challenge:
Write a new, original post based on any characters you wish, though the scene you share must include details that help the reader understand the setting: the precise time and place in which your scene happens. You can choose to write about current people and places, if you wish. As always, you’re welcome to adapt the challenge as you see fit or put your own twist on it. The goal is to get you writing.
Choose to write the setting into one of the scenes below, taking care to insert details that evoke the time and place in which the scene is set:
- A man and his wife meet for lunch in a diner on August 5th, 1970, in New York City. She’s pregnant and plans to spill the beans over lunch.
- A 12-year-old girl has her first day in her new school, after moving from California to London, England, on September 8th, 1992.
- A five-year-old boy disembarks from the Vulcania at Pier 21 in Halifax, Nova Scotia, setting foot on Canadian soil for the first time on January 30th, 1960, after emigrating from Italy.
- A horrific fire burns down the most important monument in your town, last Friday.
Elements that can help evoke setting detail include the objects that surround your characters, as well as the clothing they wear, and the type of speech they use. What sort of vehicles are used for transportation? Which clothes are fashionable? Unfashionable? Is there music playing in your scene? That too, can help transport your readers to a precise time and place.
Looking for a little more guidance and some inspiration? Matthew Weiner, creator of the television show Mad Men is famous for insisting on period-appropriate clothing, props, and music for the show, to the point of recreating the weather on critical days in history! Now that’s attention to setting.
Have fun setting your scenes. You might even have to do a little research! I can’t wait to read what you write.