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When we send a post into the blogosphere, we want to make sure our best feet are forward. That means making sure errors like typos or poor grammar don’t detract from what we have to say; it’s one of the reasons The Daily Post highlights grammar issues many of us struggle with. (With which many of us struggle?)

Grammar challenges will follow up on grammar posts, calling on you to put your new-found understanding to the test. It’s one thing to read about the rules, but another to put them into practice.

To participate, tag your posts with “DPchallenge” or leave a link to your post in the comments. (It would also be great if you could link to this post to encourage people to take part – the more the merrier!) Please be sure your post has been specifically written in response to this challenge; obvious attempts to link-bait will be deleted. We’ll keep an eye on the tag and highlight the week’s best posts on Freshly Pressed each Friday.
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Let me be perfectly candid and say that Daryl’s the Grammar Maestro in these parts. My approach to proper grammar is not unlike the Supreme Court’s approach to pornography: I know it when I see it. I’ve never diagrammed a sentence and have been known to leave participles dangling all willy-nilly, so I look forward to his posts as much as you do.

Hopefully, his wonderfully clear description of recognizing the passive voice in your writing has already been read by you,* because it’s time for the pop quiz. For this week’s Writing Challenge, we want you to pay attention to how you’re using the active and passive voices and make a conscious effort to use them in a way that produces clear, direct, and compelling posts. Here’s what you’re gonna do:

  1. Switch your post view to “Text” mode – you don’t want those green squiggly lines giving away phrases that have grammatical issues.
  2. Pick a story about something you did – a pick-up basketball game you played, a meal you cooked, a project you did around the house, whatever. The only limitation is that it needs to involve an object (e.g., the basketball, the saute pan, the cordless drill).
  3. Tell the story, making the object the focus. This doesn’t mean you have to describe slicing onions from the onion’s point of view – although I would totally read that post – but you should highlight the actions and characteristics of the object.
  4. Pay attention to the ways using the active and passive voices help or hinder your story.  You could start every sentence with “I threw the ball…,” but then you wouldn’t be focusing on the object. On the other hand, you could start every sentence with “The basketball was thrown…,” but that much passivity is going to get old fast.

Be creative. Think about each sentence: what do you want to emphasize? How can you construct a sentence that gets your point across and is engaging to read? Passive voice may be the answer, but it may not. (For a slightly more in-depth look at times when the passive voice is your friend, check out this instructive post by fellow WordPress blogger Elijah Cain.)

This may seem a bit nebulous, and that’s because it is. We don’t actually want to give you a pop quiz, we just want you to think about the function of voice when evaluating your writing. When we check out each others’ posts, we’re hoping to read a bunch of creatively written stories that really draw us into the scenes y’all are painting; nothing more.

PS: For inspiration, distraction, and a chuckle, WordPresser You Knew What I Meant recently posted about what happens when the passive voice goes completely awry.

PPS: Have you taken our user survey yet? No? Now’s as good a time as any!

*Yes, I did that on purpose.

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  1. re: “….The Daily Post highlights grammar issues many of us struggle with. (With which many of us struggle?)”

    rewrite the sentence that gives you problems; i.e. Many of us struggle with the same grammar problems so the Daily Post will highlight those.

    or…The Daily Post hightlights grammar issues and many of us struggle with the most common ones.

    Instead of fighting with a rule, revise.

    1. +1 to revise rather than fight – just thought I’d draw some attention to a personal peeve of mine, the sentence-ending preposition (although I know we’re allowed to do that now). :)

      1. You know, when I was in elementary/junior/senior high I absolutely hated the section in English class in which we fixed preposition ended sentences. It was boring and irritating and nothing but an annoyance. Now I absolutely hate when one ends a sentence with a preposition. It is just like “WHAT ARE YOU SAYING HERE?” So kudos to you on bringing your personal pet peeve to mind. You are not the only person with that problem. :D

    2. Except that that’s an archaic rule not often followed any more that only came about when the framers of the rules of English were trying to get English to be more like Latin, a language that doesn’t allow – by nature of its steadfast rules (of which English has few, if any) – you to end a sentence with a preposition. I say down with that rule! We’ll throw it out with the extra period after a sentence and excessive use of the Oxford comma!

      http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/ending-prepositions.aspx

      1. Ending sentences with prepositions goes back at least to Chaucer, and Shakespeare did it. Why pay attention to Victorian schoolmarms?

  2. Great post. The comment giving examples of revising wording when the grammar becomes difficult (which can happen on certain days and not others), is veryhelpful as well.

  3. This is a very interesting issue. Thank you for raising it. I am a grammar freak – and no doubt having said that, others will criticise my English – and I try to take care to write correctly in my posts. However, blogging is much closer to reported speech than other forms of writing. In that case, are we not allowed the occasional split infinitive or preposition ending a sentence? I do it myself because I think it gets me closer to my readers. In other forms of writing I wouldn’t do it. The message, though, is that you can always revise and make your writing more readable.

    1. I agree that blog writing is different for more formal writing for many of us; I’m sure I offend Grammar in countless ways when I blog! (Well, except for the preposition thing; I’m a traditionalist there.) But I’ve always thought that you should understand the rules first, and then figure out how you can break them to make a point.

  4. What a great idea. I wish I had more time to write!

    Passive voice seems to me to be well-suited to descriptive writing, so focusing an object is a good plan. Looking forward to seeing what comes of the challenge.

  5. Sorry – I write in English Grammar which seems to differ somewhat from American Grammar. The old “Two nations divided by a common language” rears its head again ;-)

    1. As a fellow brit I naturally have to agree with you on this point. I have posted my offering but I knew long before I hit that publish button that it wouldn’t be quite right. I can at least take a little comfort in knowing that my grammar is normally so bad it wouldn’t matter which side of the water my readers might be from.

    1. No worries, I cleaned it up. :)

      From some casual Googling, I see that the English seem not to share the horror of passive voice inculcated in American students. Still, I’d encourage you to write and explore the way how sentence structure can emphasize/de-emphasize the actor in the name of storytelling.

      1. I normally read these Writing challenge posts with interest – I’d agree that choice of structure within the sentence can add a great deal to the emphasis of either the character or the situation being encountered in the story. There are times when I’m glad that I mainly write on a documentary stage ;-) Thanks for the response and the interesting post :-)

  6. Nuts. I just don’t have time with a big wedding coming up. However, the text I borrowed for today’s post WAS full of errors, which I corrected before posting, I hope. Since most of what I post the next few days will be borrowed from the past, each one should be better than the first time it appeared, right? :-)

    1. You know, I went over this borrowed thing one more time and found it full of passive tense. The frustration! I have fixed it, now and have decided to enter it here, since I nearly re-wrote it and it is the song of my heart. I just found someone else singing it and rearranged her version. Thanks for letting us borrow ideas.
      I do not like today’s grammar because of the new gallop to erase the American serial comma. However, most of the rest is great! I’m a Lynne Truss lover and especially love that she is younger than I am.

      Okay, so here it is for the curious:

      http://katharinetrauger.wordpress.com/2012/08/20/one-moms-description/

  7. On the topic of spotting out grammatical errors and typos, I’ve found a typo in the post already.
    Where it says “… also be great it you could link to this post to encourage ..”, I believe “if” should be used instead of “it”.

  8. I spent 30 years as a tech writer in which genre the passive voice is, in theory, forbidden. However, reality has a tendency to intrude of theory. Passive voice is an absolute necessity when (a) you do not wish to reveal the agent of the action, or (b) revealing the agent would require unnecessary levels of complexity.

    There is a time and a place for everything … and a time and place for active vs. passive forms. One must take care what one wishes to convey, if you catch my drift.

    As for typos, until such time as someone offers me the services of a hotshot proofreader, I shall probably retain my title of “Queen of Typos.” I never seem to see them until after I post, then go through 30 versions until I finally weed them all out.

    It seems I only get worse with each passing year.

  9. My grammar is hopeless .. i always get caught with the wrong verb .. I think I may give this a go.. and if you are able to help me and get me writing right , well consider yourself a hero :)

  10. This was a very good challenge. At first I had no idea where to start. Then I got writing and found I quite enjoyed it. I decided my first attempt wasn’t really what the challenge was looking for so I shall post that some other time but here is my (hopefully humorous) answer – Life as a Laptop – http://mystudentstruggles.wordpress.com/2012/08/21/weekly-writing-challenge-life-as-a-laptop/
    P.S. If anyone does do the onion thing I would love to read it :)

  11. Well, this was more of a challenge than I thought it would be. I don’t really pay much attention to Grammar, after all I blog from the view point of my two year old and his grammar is somewhat less than perfect. In the end he convinced me to go with this offering although we have both decided it is more fun to simply blog freely rather than spend to much time worrying about the rules of language to much. I Hope you all enjoy reading this, which is, when all said and done the whole point. http://wp.me/p2AtOu-3O

  12. Here is mine. I wrote it last month and wished I had some help like this. I’m on a time crunch today so can’t submit anything new. Besides, my blog is photo-quotes mixed with some writing. This one does double duty–DIY and the notion of something we all fight—procrastination. Oh, there is a drill involved. You have been warned!
    Any help is appreciated. I’m glad to have forgiving readers.
    Alexandria
    http://simplysage.org/2012/07/21/the-cure-for-procrastination/

  13. this challenge has taken up much more of my time than it really should, but i’ve updated my post to include some thoughts on the exercise from a lay person’s perspective. maybe the grammar geeks out there will find it interesting or can at least provide some helpful feedback?? ;0) ta.

    1. YA ESTUVIMOS AYER HABLANDO SOBRE ESTO, PERO MIENTRAS NO ENTIENDA LO QUE NO SE PUEDE LEER, LO SIENTO

      PERO NO PIENSO APUNTARME A NADA NI COMENTAR NADA.

      SI WORDPRESS YA ESTÁ EN ESPAÑOL ¿ POR QUÉ OS CUESTA TANTO SER UN POCO AMABLES CONMIGO ???

      OS DIGO QUE EN VEZ DE ESTAR CON CARTITAS E HISTORIAS, POR QUE HOY NO ME VOY A PASAR EL DÍA CONTESTANDO

      CARTAS QUE LAS PASO, PORQUE MIRE LO QUE MIRE , ME QUEDO IGUAL. ¿ NO OS PARECE ABSURDO ? ES COMO SI TE

      REGALARAN UN LIBRO EN “” CHINO “”. ¿¿¿¿ LO LEERIAIS ????. CUANDO VES QUE EN OTRA TIENDA LO VENDEN Y ESTÁ

      EN TU IDIOMA ????????????

      CASSANDRA

      1. Hola no tienes porque enfadarte, esto esta echo para gente que habla en ingles. Primero – que la gramatica en ingles, y la gramatica en castellano son dos cosas totalmente diferentes – ya que la gramatica americana, es diferente que la inglesa. Nadie te obliga a escribir aqui. Si no entiendes, no leas en este idioma. Pero tampoco puedes esperar que todo el mundo publique en tu idioma nativo, o que traduscan lo que han escrito. Si no, estariamos traduciendo todo – chino, frances, italiano, ingles. no se puede…si esto no esta en otro idioma, es porque en otros idiomas no hay tanto seguimiento. wordpress es principalmente un sitio donde su mayor trafico es de gente que habla ingles. Entiendo tu frustracion pero este no es el sitio ni la manera para expresarla. Tu hablas español, pero quizas otra gente habla ruso – traducimos todo, en todos los idiomas del mundo? muy complicado……espero que encuentres algo en español que te entretenga!

  14. I am a member of the grammar police and licensed to highlight. If I had my way people would get three months hard labour for persistent miss use of apostrophes. After several month’s rock breaking they’d get it right. I constantly point out wrongly placed apostrophe’s on signs. My daughter just shakes her head, “Thats sad Dad, sad.”

    Well, did you spot them?

  15. Par contre, j’aimerais bien voir une version française de ce thème. Et pourquoi souhaite-je la voir ? Parce que tout le monde ne maîtrise pas la langue de Shakspeare, c’est-à-dire l’anglais. Je préfère la langue de Molière, le français, car j’habite à Paris et c’est ma langue du quotidien. J’entassis mon café, je jettais un coup d’oeil et rien n’y va…

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