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The Community Pool is for those of you looking for input, whether on post ideas, writing, blog design and layout,…

The Community Pool is for those of you looking for input, whether on post ideas, writing, blog design and layout, or anything else. If you have a post, page, or idea you want to bounce off someone, leave a comment. Your fellow bloggers can then click through and offer input either on your site, or in the comments here (feel free to indicate which you’d prefer).

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    1. I didn’t read your content because those sparkly dots got in the way. If you’re in love with the dots, you might try changing your blog theme to something that prevents that kind of interference. Check San Kloud, Albeo, Newsworthy, and others that frame blog content in a separate box.

      1. I thought the sparkly dots could be distracting…..I can take care of that…thanks for the leads and input! ~Susan :-)

      1. Thanks — I’ll take another look at that. It might be way too big, or even unnecessary . . .

  1. Good morning everyone.

    Does anyone know more about Trackbacks. I am getting trackbacks and I want to know who the sender is. How do I find out?

    I know what a Pingback and most pingback attaches the site where it came from. But with the trackbacks, when I click on the site, it doesn’t seem to exist.

    Your expertise is much appreciated.

    1. Trackbacks are a way to notify legacy blog systems that you’ve linked to them. If you link other WordPress blogs they’ll be notified automatically using pingbacks, no other action necessary.

      Think of trackbacks as the equivalent of acknowledgements and references at the end of an academic paper or chapter in a text book.

      If you are getting a lot of trackbacks from site that don’t exist then it could be some sort of spam.

  2. Good morning! I just feel like I haven’t quite found my niche and I’m not sure if I need to revisit the way my site looks (i.e., add tabs to separate things,etc.) I love to write mostly about personal experiences, I also write poetry and I love photography, although I have no desire to become professional. Should I focus on just one thing? Thanks so much!

    1. I don’t think you need to focus on just one thing. There seems to be similarities between your various types of work. I believe your blog is unified in theme even though you have the various post types.

      If you were including reviews on the latest death metal hits, I would suggest putting that in a different location from the rest of your work.

    2. What a lovely blog! I agree that there’s probably not a need a focus, but I would like to see some tabs. Without them, I can see the first few posts without exceptional effort, but I can’t really backtrack or focus just on the stuff that moves me. :)

      1. Thank you so much; I’ve been thinking the same thing about tabs…I need to figure out how to do that. Thanks so much for taking the time to give me input!

    3. Hi, you have a lovely blog and I agree with the other comments.
      I’m a new blogger (though I’ve been reading other people’s blogs for ages)… so I don’t claim to know too much about it… these are just my thoughts as a reader.
      Would be great to have an about page, so that your readers could know a bit more about you. An archives widget on the side bar would be helpful to find older posts. Perhaps adding categories would be helpful too (as Rarasaur said… would help people find the kind of content that attracts them), since there are too many tags.

      1. Thank you so much for taking time to check it out; I will look into how to get all this accomplished as soon as I have a little extra time – Thanks again!

    1. Two thoughts:

      1- If you don’t start adding tags to your posts, no one will ever be able to find them.

      2- If this will be your typical post length, I would strongly encourage you to use the zemanta feature. A picture or two will improve people’s reaction to your work. (I also suspect that including at least one picture also increases a post’s chances of being found by readers.)

    2. Tags, tags, and more tags. My experience has been that the more you add to each blog, the greater chances other readers and bloggers will find you!

    3. My only thought about the writing was maybe a little too many adjectives? It was almost too heavily bodied? I found myself just a little lost in the description rather than the story? Maybe?

  3. I would love some ideas about how to build interest in my particular blog- I’ve been posting more, and getting less attention…which worries me.I’m wondering if I need to narrow down my subject matter? And which blogs are the ones everyone feels I should stick with. Any input will be appreciated! Thanks!

    1. I see a three month hiatus. That’s not the cause but it does explain a thing or two.

      The big one is that blogging has a high attrition rate. When people stop blogging here, they’re usually not around to continue reading the blogs they followed. Your audience probably declined during your three month absence because lost viewers weren’t being replaced. It takes time to rebuild.

      I haven’t been around long enough to know for sure, but I’ve also heard that the summer months are normally slow. That may also be a contributing factor.

      These strike me as more likely explanations than anything regarding your content.

    1. :) The contest is great– light and personal, all at the same time. If I recommended anything, it’d be more pictures in the posts, and more color on the overall page– maybe something other than the default banner image? Something that is more YOU. :) Good luck with your blogging endeavors!!

    2. Your writing was really smooth and flowed nicely. I enjoyed reading it. The only suggestion I have is to consider telling a little more about the movie so that those of us who haven’t seen it, will get a better understanding of what’s going on?

  4. I have just discovered how to put text underneath a photograph, instead of alongside. This may well be obvious to most, but I asked for help with it in an earlier Community Pool thread, and didn’t find the answer then, so maybe someone else out there will find it useful.

    The ‘break’ tag (br, with style attributes) is the one that solved it for me. I think I last used a ‘break’ tag in the 1980s, doing markup for computer manuals. So I perhaps should have figured it out a bit sooner.

    I’m not at all sure it will display correctly here, still, no harm trying I suppose. So, like this, but with a ‘less than’ symbol at the start, and ‘greater than’ at the end.

    br style=”clear:both;” /

    Used here, on a post about Purple Potatoes –

  5. Hi. I like the blogging very much and have learned a tremendous amount this past year and a half. I’m not sure where I’m headed. I enjoy it … the poetry, verse writing and visuals along with all the posting education.

    I would actually like to get into something, say employment online but my skills are most likely not up to graduates of journalism and art schools. I still love it. Maybe you know where I should focus. Please have a look at my site.

    I don’t particularly like doing personal (photos, etc.), although I can incorporate feelings or a sense of abstractness in lines.

    I still like my site but love change~maybe this fall/Sept after I finish a project.
    I guess what I’m saying is I’d like to be more professional!!

    Thank you!

  6. Hi,
    In a rare spell of inspiration, I began a post that became a little eight chapter book. I wrote it in one go over a period of a week or so.

    I’m looking for constructive criticisms from non-conventional experienced authors and professional writers. I have never written a book before. This is not a commercial venture; I’m looking at awareness campaign.

    Desperately in need of help.

    Here’s the link:

    Please leave comments here on the community pool with a pingback to the page. Because it’s written on a page, I can’t tag it. Sorry.

    Thanks in advance,

    1. The best way to get people to follow your blog is to write something worth reading. A good way to find your voice as a blogger is to participate in the Daily Prompts. Other bloggers will have easy access to what you’ve written. Another way to find followers is to follow others, like the posts of others, and comments on the posts of others. By just asking people over and over again on the community pool to follow you, you are more likely to annoy than gain followers (I am too annoyed to even bother clicking on the link to your blog, but that’s just me).

    2. Feel free to ask for feedback on your site, but please do not spam the comments with repeated links to your site — they will be deleted (plus, your name is already a link to your site).

      1. I can’t find the prompt post link in my blog.I need help.
        I’ve a poem on foodies.where do I inscribe in my blogs/or some article was there in Daily Prompt.(now can’t find it)

  7. I’m new to blogging, and I started just to transport my emotions from my brain to anywhere else. I started as a way of release, to try to heal. I have always loved to write, but I’m not sure if any of it is even readable. Any advice you can give would be appreciated, either here or on my postings. Thanks!

    1. I visited your site, and found it to be soothing. I like the soft green background; easy on the eyes. I like your writings so much, I’m already following you now! ~Susan :-)

  8. Hi! If you could please spare a bit of your time to type what things about people in general saddens/distresses you when you see them (like use of multiple exclamation marks, for example) it’d be greatly appreciated.

    1. “what things about people in general saddens/distresses you when you see them (like use of multiple exclamation marks, for example)”- in regards to blogging, or just in general?

  9. I would definitely appreciate input on my blog, particularly because the topic (epilepsy) is rather niche. I am also curious as to whether a lot of people read poetry. I write in classic forms, and have of late been writing quite a bit of haiku. Comments may be left directly on my blog in the comments section of any post. Thank you very much. I appreciate the time you take to do this.

    1. First off, niche topics often make the best blogs. It often means that a blogger is focusing on what s/he knows best.

      That said, your blog title is “Brainstorms: How Epilepsy and Writing Connect” but I was having a hard time finding much discussion of epilepsy on your blog until I reached July 2.

      People read Haiku; I’ve noticed that poetry generally receives a good response around here. However, the numerous haiku entries contribute to the difficulty in finding the epilepsy material your blog claims to focus on. Renaming your blog something like “Brainstorms: Poetry and Epilepsy” seems like the least invasive way of making things consistent.

      1. Great observation, and I thank you for it. Although I enjoy writing haiku, I believe I will return to the focus of my blog, which is epilepsy. You are right. I appreciate your input. Thanks for taking the time.

    1. I have a few thoughts.

      1- Somewhere on their support page, WordPress has tips on how to select effective tags. Read that and follow their advice. You’ll get more traffic that way.

      2- The color scheme is blah but the two of you seem to have more personality than that. A custom background or header would work wonders.

      3- The blog has no tagline but the “About” page is catchy. Maybe you could pick a favorite line or two from the “About” page for your tagline. The average reader may not know the definition of “chimerical” or “chicanery,” so you really need a tagline to explain what your blog is.

  10. Apparently, I’m not the only blogger with a free WordPress blog who didn’t realize I have the capacity to embed youtube videos in my posts. It’s as easy as (& very similar to) inserting images. When you’re at the you-tube video site, just click on share. You’ll get a shortened URL which you can then copy. Go to your post and click on “Add Media” (like you would to insert an image). Then click on “Insert from URL” in the left menu bar and paste the link you got from “share” on youtube. You can enter a title, but it won’t show up with the video. Then just click insert to “insert into post” like you would with an image.

    1. Thanks for that – very helpful. I’ve seen the ‘share’ tag on youtube, but thought it was just for facebook etc (and didn’t investigate). :)

  11. My question concerns how to get people to loyally follow my log when I don’t have a nisch topic. I recently started a blog entirely about long interviews rather than regular blog posts and quickly discovered that people love emotional stories, but might not be as interested in general ones. The most break-through post has so far been this one, about a guy who left the Mormon church after 34 years and a decade of inner struggle:

    However, even that post has mainly been read by people who can relate and are in the same situation. How do I attract “the mass” and get people to follow the blog when I don’t have a clear nisch and the core is “long interviews on random topics” rather than “random posts on a specific topic”.

    Also, some other questions:

    – Should I rethink my strategy and make the blog all about lifechanging stories and not as “mixed” as it is now, to target my audience? (For example, I have an interview with a murder and ex inmate coming up, and one with a victim of sexual abuse as a child – they can’t really compare to interviews about skydiving or even being an astronaut.) Problem is, being able to write so broadly is what keeps my interested and if I would narrow it down like that I fear I would eventually quit.

    – How can I attract readers to other stories? I have clear images/banners in the sidebar but statistics show that only very few people click on to a second story – most read what they came for and leave.

    – Anything I should change about the general look of the site?

    – Anything I should change about the general layout/presentation of the interview posts? They all look kind of similar to the one linked to above, with a question-answer style writing, images in the text, quotes and additional media mixed together.

    I’ve started like a billion wordpress blogs over the years but this is the first that I really feel can go on for years and still have me want to contine writing. Any feedback to improve is greatly appreciated!

    1. For starters, clicking on your user name connects me to a site about geocaching. Change it to connect to your blog.

      Next, I have a question for you. Is there something consistent in the way you conduct interviews? Something that other interviewers don’t do? If there is, that’s something you could elevate to part of your blog’s topic without changing anything.

      If you discover a common thread, try to integrate it into a new blog title. “Cool Interviews” doesn’t inspire much more viewing because “cool” is such an overused word. “Cool” is boring, so replace the word with something more concrete and specific. (In other words, give readers a sense that what they love about your Mormon post carries over to other things you write about. “Cool” doesn’t do that.)

      And the tagline might be better as “Amazing. Inspiring. Enlightening.” instead of the past tense forms you currently use.

      1. This is some of the best blogger advice I’ve ever received :D You’re right about every point and I haven’t thought of either before. Thanks!

    2. Get interested in other people blogs – and follow them. Some will come and visit your blog. And some will even follow you back.
      Tag, tag, tag and tag again. Each person who likes one post may get your blogrecommended again when you bring up new stuff, so to gain new readers at all is crucial. And – have patience.
      Unless you get freshly pressed which happens to only a few of the thousands of blogs opened each day, popularity grows slowly.

  12. Hi everyone,
    I’ve been blogging for about four months now (I can’t believe it). Most of my stuff is opinion pieces on pop culture or politics, but I also have some humor pieces or general essays that I just don’t know what else to do with. I’m wondering if having a bit of everything is a good thing or makes people more confused. Any thoughts would be super appreciated!

    1. Your blog claims that you are “exploring the pop culture galaxy” but your comment here says you do a lot of other stuff.

      If I were subscribing to a self-proclaimed pop culture blog, I’d be confused by the politics because it’s not what you’re advertising. (And if I clicked on your blog for a political article, the pop culture tagline would discourage me from exploring further.) Your humor tends to be about pop culture, so that fits perfectly.

      It’s okay (and often desirable) to have diverse things on your blog. At some point, though, it all needs to fit under some overarching umbrella. Is there some commonality between your pop culture and political posts? If so, highlight that in your tagline.

  13. Hope everone having a great day! I’m not super savy when it comes to computers. I know a little bit about design, but I would really appreciate some input about my blog design. I’m a photographer and I’m using my blog as a part of promoting my business. I’m thinking of adding more pages in the top meny; black/white photography, landscape photography, portraits etc. But I’m worried that it’s going to be too much. I want to keep a simple, clean design, and at the same time I have so much more of my work that I want to have clearly visible. Any thoughts? I’d really appreciate it. Thank you./Maria

    1. Maybe someone else can comment on the SEO bit because I’m no expert on that. However, I see three issues in your blog:

      1- I see posts where you have used more than 15 tags and categories. When you do this, WordPress excludes the post from the Reader and you lose an avenue for people to find your blog.

      2- “Unique Experiences with Travel, Service, Scams, and Humor” is more of a tagline than a blog title. (And “Unique” is not the most exciting word you could use. Replace it.) On your header menu, you have a page called “Attention business owners, wake up!” That would make an excellent blog title (and it would probably attract more visitors), especially if you use your current title as a descriptive tagline.

      3- Your blog title is tiny and your tagline is almost invisible. Since you’re using a premium theme, I assume it would be possible to integrate the title and tagline into your header image. The text behind that isn’t difficult. Just paste your header image into a PowerPoint document (or image editing program), put text over it where it will do the least damage, and save the thing as a JPEG. (I assume WordPress lets you crop a header image before you put it up. If you go the PowerPoint route, that’s a critical step. I also assume you can then delete the title and tagline from where they are now.)

      1. Hi thanks again, I was wondering if I removed my tags so that I have less than 15 tags and categories combined , will WordPress Reader pick that up or do you think that I need to publish the posts again again?

  14. I blog mainly to get my ideas out there and connect with the people who are open minded enough to consider my ideas. I’m not trying to change anyone’s mind or beliefs. I just want to present what I hope is a balanced, thoughtful and logical approach to what I see going on in the world.
    I am always thankful for feedback on my content, site look and so on. Thanks!

  15. Hi! I have been blogging for 13 months, and it is my passion. I am interested in how to market my blog to attract more readers to encourage, educate, and entertain and to get noticed by other blogs and publications. I would like to write professionally, and I am looking for practical steps to do so. Thanks so much for any advice and feedback you have to share! My blog can be found at

    1. hi
      i just joined yesterday and to get an idea of what usually attracts people to blogs,i checked out various blogs.
      i would like to inform you that your blog is very interesting to read with all pictures and quite inspiring too
      all the best!!

    1. Looks like you’re off to a good start. If you want jump right into the community of bloggers from the get go, I’d suggest taking a look at WordPress’s Daily Prompts and Weekly Challenges. If they appeal to you, they will really help you to find your voice as a blogger while immediately connecting you with other bloggers. If they don’t, you might even consider submitting some prompts of your own. Main thing, though, is to write what is interesting to YOU, about what YOU are passionate about.

      1. Thanks for taking the time to read it. And thank you for the advice. And yeah ive got some more ideas on what to write, just hope people will notice. Ill keep an eye the the weekly prompts.

  16. Hey people!

    Recently I’ve been tweaking my blogs appearance a bit, at least what I’m limited to with my current theme, and I figured out how to upload my own background and header image.

    I would like some feedback and maybe some ideas what I could use as a header image, something that might make my blog a bit more unique.

    I currently am using the twenty ten theme, but I can’t use custom css because I believe I have to pay to use it (broke college kid here).


  17. Anyone have input on My Blog? How to attract more viewers? Does the layout look right? Blog talks about injustices and also the human condition, talks about art, plan to have photography, but my blog just looks boring to me.

    1. The numerous pictures you have of yourself as a background image don’t fit your blog’s topic. The pics say “personal blog,” not “social justice and art blog.”

      So I definitely recommend a different background image. Perhaps you could create a similar arrangement of portraits you’ve drawn. This could be especially good if you have enough black and white pics comparable to what you did of Michael Jackson on July 2.

      You’re a good enough artist to make that work.

      1. Thanks so much for the feedback, you’re absolutely right about the background pic. I didn’t know what to do for the background so I just put a collage of myself lol. Good idea about the collage of black and white drawn portraits, i never thought of it that way! :)

  18. I would love any feed back I could get weather it has to do with the appearance of my site or its content. I am just starting out and all help/ input is welcome,

    1. Let me put it this way. You have a wonderful background image and it looks amazing with the Piano Black theme. The blog title is good, as is the tagline.

      When I look at the blog you have my attention.

      However, it’s white text on a dark background and that’s difficult for a lot of people to read. There is a way to make it a little easier for people, though.

      When you’re writing a post, there’s a row of icons above the text box. The farthest to the right is “Show/Hide Kitchen Sink.” Click on that and you’ll get a second row of icons and a drop down menu. The drop down menu lets you change the font size; with Piano Black, I recommend “Header 3″ or larger for all of your text.

  19. Hi everyone :) I’ve been debating about whether or not to start a blog for a while now. I have been a journalist for a few years now but always debated on whether or not to branch out and do something for fun. I just put up my first post today. Any feedback would be amazing! Thanks :)

      1. You’re a good writer, and you have a nice start. However, you need to have more tags so more people can find you. As soon as you start coming up with more content and become adjusted to the community, you’ll be good to go.

    1. Hi the colours are a little bright, the swills put me off while reading, congratulations btw hard to judge as I think all Philippine women are beautiful and one with brains, country loving and environmentally friendly what more of a role model a country can want. I know there are issues with womens education in the Philippines, so its great to see that an interracial and intereligious countries starting to work. Keep up the good work for yourself, your country and the lives of the girls that will hopefully see you as their role model and good luck with the national competition.

      You can find my blogs

      Pete =)

  20. Hey y’all,

    I just started blogging about a week ago and I’d love a critique! Just general comments/thoughts on my theme, content, etc.

  21. Would someone please review my blog post? Yes I know I only have one and the design of the page is simple but I want to focus on content quality before my theme. Thanks!


  22. Hi everyone. I recently started a blog where I mainly write about travel (stories and musings along with restaurant/ hotel recommendations, things to do, places to see, travel tips, etc.). I would really appreciate some feedback on the content. Is it too diverse to be of consistent interest to most readers? What kind of topics would be more interesting?

    1. Your blog advertises itself as a travel blog and fulfills that promise. The diversity of travel topics is to be expected.

      Realistically, almost no travel blog will be of consistent interest to most readers. People will be interested in various types of travel and have different budgets. Those budgets will influence the destinations they’re interested in and the affordable destinations will vary according to a reader’s location. Some may be looking for new destination ideas and others may seek ideas for international cooking they can find a recipe for and try out at home.

      Long story short, write what interests you and what you can make interesting for others. The rest will take care of itself.

  23. Hi, I would like some inputs and comments on my blog. I enjoy blogging simply I love to write and share my thoughts. I read many others’ blog too. One of the way I know to increase traffic is to post regularly. I have been starting to do that, however, I find reaching out to more audience rather difficult. I have read ways to increase traffic but somehow I think it isn’t sufficient. I do not mind anyone criticising my blog, at least that will help me improve. I hope I’ll be able to get some useful critics from any of you so that I know what is wrong. Thank you!

    1. hi christy, i see it is a good site and less traffic is common for me though. You are doing fine work. I have a gift for your kids. I want you to help them make world’s longest writing pencil… This will make them creative at young age and help them understand conservation values. Link:

  24. A few days ago my current post surpassed all the other post prior to that and became my most popular post in one single day. Tracking them they came from my work in publishing on social media. Mostly new people arriving directly to that page. However great the day was, I received no comments. In your opinion why? Check out

    Why would you not leave a comment?

    1. You probably know this, but page or post views run high relative to the “interaction” stats (likes and comments). An example: a post might have 50 views but only 15 likes and three comments. Personally, I comment on a very small percentage of the blog posts I read — maybe 5% max. Often I’m reading on a mobile device and don’t like or comment on something I do like and do wish to comment on (trickier to do that on a wee screen) and sometimes forget to do it when I’m back on my laptop. I also find a get a big uptick in numbers when I share on social media (Facebook in particular). The downside is that all of the comments happen there, and not on my blog proper.

      1. Thanks Jeni,

        I do appreciate the comments. I do realize what you said. I’m really trying to focus on interaction. Its the one thing that I’m not getting wether its likes, shares or comments. Its hard to steer the boat without feedback from readership. Throwing darts blindfolded.

    2. Lack of feedback can be challenging, for sure.

      I did take a look at that post and have a few more thoughts …

      I noticed that some of your paragraphs run long … not saying that’s a reason for limited interaction, but as a reader, I find shorter sections more engaging and easy to follow. More paragraphs will boost the overall post/page length but it aids readability. Where you quote a Bible verse, you could use the quote/indent feature … just a suggestion.

      The other thing is that anything that has any kind of significant religious content is guaranteed to be polarizing. This is *not* a reason not to write about it or to include religious references in your posts; if it’s significant to/for you, write about it, just be aware that it *may* limit your audience somewhat. As a rule, I don’t comment on posts with religious themes; others have the same approach to political posts.

      1. My paragraphs is my one downfall and I use a template, but get away from it. I think I can get two post out of everyone I write due to the length. I’m running under 1000 words per and know for most bloggers the rule of thumb for length is 500 but I’ve also read other reputable bloggers say 1000 is fine as long as you can keep the reader interested and use the tricks of the trade to keep them engaged such as list, italics, quotes, a photo, etc as your blog flows. Pulling them in.

        To be honest with you I was going to use more quotes out of the bible to strengthen my point but cut them out because of length and sensitivity. I didn’t want to over do it. I’ve been worked on this for two weeks and then sat on it for two more. I didn’t want to drive away readership but wanted to capture the early history. I also decided to take a risk and see if I could drive up links or catch some controversial comments, I got the bump in readership but failed to get the dialogue.

        I will likely stay away from it in the future in the depth that I went this time. Great Points.

  25. My blog is ‘Your Well Wisher Program’ and attempts to solve commonly known problems. I mentioned solutions on environment, water, health, technology & humanity. Request your feedback. thanks.

  26. Hi,
    I would like some help please on writing the disclaimer for my blog (see link below). I did stumble across an example posted by the admin when I was on my phone. I have been trying to relocate that, but with no luck. Do you guys have any suggestions or maybe point me to where I can get some help on wording this properly.

    Also any comments on the layout of my blog would be really appreciated.:)

    ( )


    1. The design looks good but there’s one huge problem. Your background image is 2.7 MB and takes forever to load. Just to compare, mine is 328 KB and is probably larger than it’s supposed to be.

      People using cell phones (who pay for data) and others with slow internet connections aren’t going to stick around for your image to load. And once you eventually start piling on pictures in your posts, it’s only going to get worse.

      The best way I’ve found to reduce the file size is to open the picture with an image editing program and save it at a much lower resolution. This normally doesn’t affect how the picture looks.