Community Pool
The Community Pool is for those of you looking for input, whether on post ideas, writing, blog design and layout, or anything else. If you have a post, page, or idea you want to bounce off someone, leave a comment. Your fellow bloggers can then click through and offer input either on your site, or in the comments here (feel free to indicate which you’d prefer).
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- You’ll get the best feedback if you can be as specific as possible about what you’d like people to respond to or where you’re struggling.
- Please keep all comments civil and constructive. We’re here to help and support one another, not to beat anyone down.
- If you haven’t looked at our Commenting Guidelines in a while, now might be a good time.
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It would be effective for me to get comments when the reader likes my post. Since we are all writers, leaving your footprints is great.
I agree. If every person that liked a post commented also, the feedback would surely prove valuable.
I know! And, I find, I am more likely to explore the commenter’s blogs than those of people who simply “like” it. I’d be so helpful if people left something more than “So pretty!” and “Great post!” — but I am thankful for those too.
I agree. Although I appreciate and like I receive, I’m much more likely to check out a commenter’s blog.
I also understand why people don’t comment – sometimes you simply have nothing to say on the matter!
Yes, I also would like direct comments about lines that spoke to you…it would help more than just saying that you “liked” it…thank you!
Very true.
Constructive comments are most certainly my favourite. 
I’ve been seeing an ugly trend in the “Likes” recently… Likes by spammers. They haven’t read the post, they don’t descriminate about the topic, they just automatically “Like” the new posts to give a link back to their site which is focused on selling something in order to boost their SEO (and as a bonus maybe you’ll click to view their advertisement too).
I’ve also noticed this. I suppose there are endless ways spammers can well, spam, in this day. It’s unfortunate really, particularly as there are so many (somewhat) honest salesmen/women.
when your are new writing, fears come to your mind and the fact to see a ,’ like’ in your post is exiting but could be more exiting and constructive eave comments. I am new writing and I would love to know what the community think about my job.
I think if you like something (and as we all are writers in one or other way) I would love to know what you like most…..
My blog is here: http://liquidmatthew.wordpress.com/ I’m mostly looking for general feedback, but I’m most interested in how I can improve my About Me page, and whether the topics I’m posting about seem coherent. I’m worried I’m spread out too thinly, trying to cover too much. Thanks!
A thought on your About Me page: perhaps add links to your favorite stories on your blog? Like, “If you are new, then see these of my favorites to get acclimated” type of thing.
Great idea! I’ll do that, thanks!
A warning about the naked lady in your header might have been appreciated! I’m at work!
I also like to see comments, it kind of puts a face and personality to the reader. One thing that used to really bug me was that in stats section I would see 12 views for a particular posts but more than 15 likes. So I was like how could people like something they didn’t even read.
Anyway I have stopped doing detailed analysis. I am happier to receive comments and chat with my readers
Agree!
I also like comments more than likes, but I appreciate both. If I ask questions in my posts, I genuinely want to start a conversation/care about the response To me, blogging is not a gallery.
Last week I got some great feedback but, me being somewhat greedy, am back for some more.
This week I’d love to know what type of thing you guys like to read on blogs and if my blog covers it.
My blog is Opinionated Duck and I’ll be browsing the comments and giving feedback as much as I can. I’ll also be checking out some of your blogs too, my main priority being those that help me out but I’ll check some others out too.
Happy blogging and keep writing!
Thanks!
Hi, I have just started a blog; I am learning as I go. I have been looking a number to call for customer support and realize there is not one. I stumbled onto this page. You seemed to be very knowledgeable so perhaps you can help me. O.k so first, the Community Pool page said this is where you could leave ideas, comments… but I did not see where I could start my own comments, questions only where I could reply to others.
Next, my original problem for seeking help. My blog is about stories of my family, cooking, recipes… I am receiving replies that have nothing to do with my blog; responses about shoes, clothing, and casinos gambling. Why and how do I stop receiving them? Is it possible that my address somehow got crossed with others?
Thank you for your help,
Linda
Hi Linda,
You can leave your comments by scrolling to the bottom of the page and typing into the box that says ‘Leave a reply’.
The likely hood of things are that you’ve been being spammed. This is a common problem among many bloggers have to deal with. You can mark these comments as spam on your dashboard.
I hope I helped in the slightest. Good luck upon your blogging journey!
OpD
I agree. It sounds like these comments are just spam. Ignore them.
Thank you!
Linda, If you are like me and didn’t know my way around the dashboard when I began…I’ll tell you how to look for spam and delete it …
If you haven’t already done it, you might also want to adjust your settings to require approval of comments before they appear on your blog. Otherwise, those spam comments might end up in the comment section of your posts.
go under Setting and click Discussion Settings. These settings will limit your spam. You can add words to comment black list to block some of the spam.
I just took a look at your blog and decided to be a follower
Now I have two comments. The first is that I hope you write about whatever is interesting to you. This is not a job where you have to write what we tell you. I want to see your own personality, thoughts and interests on your blog. I hope this does not offend you.
The second comment is I had a problem with your blog downloading on my laptop. I don’t know what your theme is supposed to look like but the whole right side of the computer screen was black. It did not look right.
I hope this does not sound too negative. I am a pretty positive person and I look forward to reading your blog
I will try to stay true to my personality, I am using the Hemming way theme, you are not offending me but helping me, any suggestions only help, not hurt me
Thanks!
I was wondering, who was this comment directed to?
It just seems that it is coming up as a reply to both Linda and my comments
Thanks
I just had a look at your blog, and found your wide range of posts interesting and insightful, with a nice simple layout as well as your own unique touches. After reading around a little I decided to become a follower, and can’t wait to read more. I really liked the writing prompts, and as I am a new blogger they are great ideas for starting new posts. I liked the photographs you have used, as well.
Thank you so much! It means so much to me when someone enjoys what I am doing just a fraction of how much I enjoy it.
I’d always like constructive input on my blogs — I’m just learning and could use the guidance.
Hi, not sure about the blog template you are using. All your widgets are at the bottom of the page rather than down the side – I initially thought you did not have any. The first thing I look for on a blog is how you subscribe and an index of some description.
Does anyone else agree with this?
I agree with Piglet In Portugal, I’d change the theme if I were you.
The widgets are particularly crowded and difficult to find. I also don’t like to read a blog if the design is off.
There are many themes you might consider, even if you want to remain minimalistic. Just take into consideration these points:
Appearance
Navigation
Over-crowding
Legibility
As for the content, I believe you have some thought-provoking posts. In particular, Let There Be Peace.
I see that you’re fairly new and as long as you keep on doing what you’re doing, you’ll do well.
Keep up the good work!
I agree with the commentators above about the theme. Perhaps it’s just my laptop or the general lack of savvy with technology, but when I go to your blog, these wide dark margins appear on both sides of the screen–sort of “dead space”. It seems like a waste. Also it makes me wonder if that theme was more primed for cell phone reading.
Also, I agree that you should make it easier for people to see and access your widgets. When I think, “Oh, I want to subscribe to this blog” or “Oh, I wonder if this author wrote about THIS specific thing”–I automatically look to the top right of the screen. I think it’d be helpful to have the widgets there. I didn’t even realize that you had those widgets there until I saw the comments above.
Do you think it is a good idea to add a “translate” widget to our blogs?
That is a great idea
Anyone know where we get one?
I just copy and paste to Google, haven’t thought of a widget. There has to be something somewhere.
I like the idea, I was searching for that….
If it’s Google Translate that does it–it’s a yes and a no. It is not a good, smooth translation, but it does get the point across. May be helpful, but with a caveat–you should make it clear where the translation comes from (“Google Translate”, for example), so people can adjust their expectations accordingly.
That said, HOW do you add that translate option?
Machine translations suck.
I just write two blogs, one in English and one in German.
Hmmm I know, but it’s better than nothng don’t you think?
I’m in two minds as I get a lot of Portuguewe visitors to my blog, but I don’t speak Portuguese.
I am not sure if it is better than nothing. If I read a machine translation of something, I may believe that the original is also crap, just based on the crappy translation. It might do a disservice to you as a writer.
that’s true
Machine translation is a joke. No chance to read my German blog using it. And I often wonder how could it work to do some aesthetic posts and to see it in a cellphone at the same time. That are expectations which couldn’t be fullfilled. It’s even a sad joke to see big photos on a laptop screen.
I use translation software and have no issues with the translation. Sometimes the sentence structure is awkward for me, but I still understand the meaning and that is all good with me.
Yeah I use Chrome translation to read the few German fashion blogs I follow. I get the meaning, and when I hover I can see the original so it’s good for my German learning.
I would appreciate some help with this one: http://mdmommusings.com/2013/01/26/puppies-and-lo…y-you-ate-that/
Specifically, I am struggling with the title! Why do some titles come so easily and others …not? My last title “Of Babies and Donuts” was a breeze but, this one about the puppy and barf – not easy at all!
Your link is not working, you should have some more characters instead of the ellipsis (‘…’)
I also find titles the hardest to come up with. Trying to get the balance between humour, thought-provocative and short always troubles me.
I don’t know of what help I’d be but I am willing to try, could you like my to the correct link please?
Good luck!
It’s probably this link: http://mdmommusings.com/2013/01/26/puppies-and-love-or-seriously-you-ate-that/
Thanks.
How about, “barking at the carpet”
I actually like that title. I am a newbie blogger, so can’t really comment on how to maximize traffic, but, as a reader, I would respond to this. It reflects the feel of the blog and adds a sense of your voice at the very beginning. Also, I thought exactly THAT about my cat, so I’d want to read it.
Titles can be so hard! I liked the title, though. Sometimes, I think, we just have to roll with it. It sparks an interest from the reader–which is the most important thing.
I don’t know what blogging is,I’m a beginng writer with one book published The Runaway Files,by Tennessee Nate.I supposed tthis could be used as a journal.
I would have to say spriits down today.My publisher told me in a month they are merging with Radom House.They said onlyauthors that sell well will be kept.All other authors they won’t print on demand know more.But for $800 I can get book turned into screen play.
Blogging is about sharing. Sharing information, creativity, or thoughts. Since you are a beginner at both blogging and writing, you could choose to blog about the writing experience from the beginner’s viewpoint. There are many Indies here; you can connect with a few and see what they are doing to promote their material.
I noticed people are using pingback but I am having trouble enabling it on my blog. I went to the support section and my screen options don’t have the same options listed as on the support example. What might I be doing wrong?
OK, not sure if this will help, but here goes: From the Dashboard, under Settings, go to Discussion Settings and then tick the box that says “Allow link notifications from other blogs (pingbacks and trackbacks)”
Hi Karen, thanks for trying. I followed that path and that box is already ticked. I guess it’s just user error. I’ll figure it all out as time goes by. Thanks!
Next month I will have been blogging for a year. My content is geared towards architecture & sustainability. I would like tips on how to get followers to be more interactive in commenting or making suggestions about what they would like to see! I love to feature photos of architecture, take the weekly photo challenge to show my perspective of the subject, and share my point of view on architecture and share my knowledge of sustainability. I also like to involve randoms of my life because I feel it makes my blog more personal. It is about architecture, design and sustainability, but is also about my journey in learning more about all of those fields. Check it out and let me know what you think! http://oldworldnewgirl.wordpress.com/2012/09/16/reclaimed-wood-love-idesign-sunday-green-bloggin/
I like your blog, it reminds me of the magazine ‘Dwell’. I like the addition of the personal thoughts, isn’t that what blogging is for ? My only suggestion is to maybe make the posts just a bit shorter, maybe split up the ones that might have multiple ideas ?
And my goodness, you have more than 1,200 followers! I wish I had that many!
Thank you for your advice, Peter! I tend to talk a lot and I think that shows in my post lol! And I think the followers are from integrating my facebook with this, so I hope to get more active followers who will create conversation based off of the blogs. To be compared to “Dwell”.. just WOW! Thank you =) I will take your critiques and try to make OWNG better!
I posted this question on last weeks post – posting this here again since there were no replies -
Hi Community Pool, looking for some feedback on my blog. I don’t have a general theme or focus in terms of topics, I just write about what I feel or am doing at the time. I’m into poetry, writing songs or just putting my thoughts down on paper. I’ve categorized my site in that way, would like to know what you think and if there’s a better way of doing things so that readers can find my content easily.
Thanks in advance! Here’s a link to my blog – http://mihirkamat.wordpress.com
I really don’t think you need a set theme, I have used three subjects in my main title Photography, Pain & Life but with that I can cover almost everything. What I did do and I will warn everyone about it. I had over a year of work on the blog and I was tired, had all manner of things to do including closing some obsolete databases on my server and yes! you guest I closed down the wrong one and wiped everything songs, poems, muses, photographs all gone. So if a pop-up asks ‘Are you sure you want to delete this’ double check or be sorry. Anyway over the last week I have been rebuilding – http://mysoresoul.co.uk/ you welcome to look
Yikes! Will watch for the delete button! Thanks for your comments!
There is nothing worse, I need to pay attention sometimes, I once deleted one of my external hard drives with over a thousand images on, luckily most of them were backups but still the same these things happen and it hurts lol.
I like the look of your blog–it’s uncluttered, so whatever is the mood or theme of your post–it can talk for itself.
However, with such a wide span of themes covered, I wonder if it would be helpful to have a Category Cloud, with not just the main categories (poems, songs, thoughts), but drilling further down, so readers can easily hop to the themes within those three areas that interest them most. What do you think? Truth be told, I find that cloud helpful for quickly finding posts on my own blog–for example, my main categories are “Wanderings,” “Weekend Escapes,” “Wildlife”, “Festivals,” and “Musings”. But, say, I want to see everything on the American Southwest or Puerto Rico under “Wanderings”, or see “UNESCO sites” under any of the categories–I can easily get to that from the cloud anywhere on my blog.
In terms of positioning it on the right-hand-side of the screen, I’d put it right under your “What Readers Liked” widget. Also, I’d put the “Follow this blog” further up. To me, it’d seem logical to first have a widget about you, the “Follow this blog”, then “Search this blog”, then “What Readers Liked”, then “Category Cloud”.
Perhaps, above the last “Notice”, you could add the calendar of your posts. In my own reading, I sometimes remember when the post was published, not the exact title–so that would be another way to help people find what they want.
I hope this is helpful. I look forward to reading to your next posts.
Thanks – these are some great insights. And yes, definitely helpful.
I’ve not been a big fan of the category cloud, especially since I write about a host of topics. I’ve had folks telling me that it does not really make things easy for them to find something they’re looking for on my site – maybe it’s just me. I’ve also been a bit divided on the calendar – it’s definitely a great tool but just takes too much real estate on the page without adding too much value.
That being said, I will consider the placement positions you spoke about.
Thanks again for the wonderful feedback. I am following your blog as well – will watch for more!
It appears that you have a focus on feeling, emotions. You have some very interesting titles. With such colorful titles, it would be nice to have a more colorful background.
Interesting thought! I’ve been trying to keep the look plain and simple so that the focus is more on the content rather than anything else. But it wouldn’t hurt to experiment with something new! Thanks for your feedback!
I don’t think you should change a thing. It looks really good. I think the titles of your posts will let readers know what is where.
Thanks for the feedback!
Mihirkamat, I checked out your blog and quite like the layout. Your topics are light and engaging, You have splashes of color with the graphics you added. It works. Please do your thing… There are all sorts of ideas out in the blogging world about to niche or not to niche. I say write and grow and if a niche calls you, then act on it… Don’t bother with it right now as you are developing a body of work and will find out what appeals to you as time goes by. Best wishes!
E
Thanks! Appreciate your wishes and will hold on to your wise words.
I am relatively new to blogging (mine is a travel blog: http://transplantedtatar.wordpress.com/), so I am grateful to have this forum to request feedback. Here are two of the questions I’ve been wrestling with in particular:
1) I wonder if my blog organization makes sense. Is it easy enough to navigate? Does it encourage further exploration? (I began with one of the free templates–this one felt more comfortable and flexible to me than the others.)
2) I wonder if my individual posts are too long. For example, here are my two longer posts: http://transplantedtatar.wordpress.com/2013/01/05/two-craters-and-two-ruins/ or http://transplantedtatar.wordpress.com/2013/01/01/a-day-in-that-astonishing-chicago/ Would it be better to split them up? I just get so excited about describing a day that splitting it up seems like weakening the total “package”, ruining the flow.
Any and all critiques are much appreciated!
I had no issues finding my way around the blogsite, I did not think the post Two Craters and Two Ruins was overly long; however, it was two posts together in my opinion. If you seperate the two blog post, you can bind them together with a sentence that says you are going heading to the ruins and leave a link to follow to the ruins post.
Thank you! I know you are right, I just have this anxiety about splitting up something that was this one-gulp experience for me–so then people can stumble upon one and not see the other, and not get the full picture. But you are right–it can all be linked.
Yes i find them posts too long, I’d split them up. Your blog is very organised, easy to find what you want even if your just browsing x
Thank you for this feedback! You are right. I know you are. I just need to get over myself and do this the logical way, instead of hoping to provide this “one-stop-post” that gets too overwhelming in practice.
Exactly I know its sometimes hard to stop writing when you are writing i about something you enjoy. Maybe try bulletpoints too? x
Excellent point! I just began doing that–and numbering (top five, etc.). Thank you. You put me at peace with things I knew I had to do, just didn’t feel ready enough to do it.
I always try and put myself in the readers shoes, or think what way you like things to be when you’re reading
x
I read “A Day in that Astonishing Chicago” and found it a bit too long. You could probably break it into two manageable posts. My very first post was so long I preemptively broke it into 3. I completely understand your concern about readers being able to navigate and read the full experience. I handled that by linking back to the first part of the post at the very beginning of the second and third parts. Then, the end of the first post links to the second, and the second to the third. Just something you might want to try.
I loved looking at the pictures in your post; even after I stopped reading I kept scrolling down and enjoying the images. They are magnificent! You might also consider posting a photo gallery and using short captions to share more of your experiences without writing a very long post. I would love to see more of your photos.
Thank you–linking to previous posts at the very beginning is a good idea–and it would relieve my general worry of breaking up the story. And thank you for the pictures comment–a gallery, yes, maybe–or some posts with more pictures and less words. Sound good, actually.
Thank you.
I love the way you’ve organized your blog and the font size is great for those of us who need reading glasses. i always advice bloggers to PLEASE have a recent posts on the sidebar for easy navigation and you have that already. I like your top post widget with pictures… I love visuals.
As for your long posts, it’s always a good idea to break up the paragraphs so the eyes don’t wander. You can have a post in series too – I II II – and link them. I’m a big fan of pictures… they say more than tons of words… Use them. Keep on going. You’re doing great!
E
to transplanted tator…I think you need to add a picture header, to ease all the headers…too many words and some other colors than grey for your background…just makes it easier on the eyes. And I don’t know how others feel, but I hate getting my email hammered with blog comments, and since we now have the “Reader” for those we follow, it’s kind of redundent. So maybe lose the big box that says, Follow me via email, it just takes up space you can use for better things and when someone “follows” you they get your posts already in the Reader… good luck, and really interesting blog….:)
http://vivekkunwar.com
I would be thankful if some of you could let me know what you think of my photography.
very nice esp the underwater ones! x
Wow, great captures of movement–both outwardly and internal (in portraits). I like the photographs of bodies moving, like the shoot in the desert or the dancers, but I think I connect to your images more when you capture a face, an expression, somebody’s internal world, as well as the movement (like the photo of the monks, or the underwater images).
I’ll also say ‘Wow!” All great photos! I wonder if you could give some more detail on how you take your photos ? Such as the type of equipment you use, any filters, type of lightings, that sort of thing ? I’m not much of a technical photographer myself, but I like reading about how photos are taken, how they can be made to look better, F stops, and all that technical stuff.
Absolutely breathtaking photography.
That is all.
incredibly good photography, you definetly have the eye….the one thing I did notice tho, is some of them seem just a tiny bit blurry….although it could just be me, lol, but maybe you could download a photo program, that lets you adjust the detail in digital photo’s….it happens to me alot when I upload them into the uploader, they alter somehow and look a touch blurry. Otherwise, I expect to see you working for NatGeo or Vogue someday, those are really good!!!
it would be great if someone could check out my Blog and tell me how you like it. I’d appreciate information which kind of my posts is the most appealing one =)
http://thepunktheory.wordpress.com/
The posts I read seem rather short. A few images could help flesh out the posts and enhance the meanings.
thank you very much for the feedback =)
I agree with Sha’tashari about images–they’d be helpful in bringing your point in each blog to life.
Generally, I must admit, the grey spotty background around the blog was distracting to me–it is agitating and took away (for me) from focusing fully on your individual posts.
Also, I’d add some more connections between your blogs, and maybe some brief context. For example, this 55 Things to Do list (http://thepunktheory.wordpress.com/challenge/bucket-list-55-things-to-do-before-you-die/)–looks great, but it leaves me wanting to know why some things are important to you, and how those things that you did measure up to your expectations (you could link them to posts about your thoughts on each one, or at least for some of them).
thank you for the feedback, I’ll change the background immediately =)
I do like the look of your blog layout. It feels like I am looking at a really nice leather portfolio. However I wish I could read your entire post without having to leave your main page.
I agree. At the least, I’d like more chunk on the first page to entice me to click into the post. I didn’t read any of your posts in full because I had nothing to catch me.
thanks for the feedback =)
I need some advice on the easiest way to organize my posts onto different pages. Busy Mom, not a lot of time to spare…blogging through nap/rest times. I have 70 posts and people tell me that they can’t go back and find older posts, so I thought pages to organize the topics would be best. Yes? Is there a shortcut? Help. Thanks! http://www.mommyverbs.wordpress.com
Why don’t you start catagorizing your posts, then you can have a catagories widget in your side bar x
Please forgive my ignorance here…is that what I need? I do name categories on my posts, so with this widget it would sort the posts into those for others to find them easily?
Yes you need to put a catagory on each post e.g if I write about a lipstick I’ll tag it as lipstick and put it in the Beauty Catagory I that I have set upx
Thanks. Really appreciate the help. I’ve been learning as I go…and I don’t think I have a good handle on the tagging and/or categories yet. A work in progress. This is a great forum to put out a question…I’ve been looking for something like this. Thanks!
Yeh its handy. your welcome, hope I helped a bit x have a look at my blog and you’ll see the catagories on my sidebar, it might give you an idea of what I mean x
Yes! Thanks! Your page is neat and clean and organized and chock full of goodies! Kind of what I had in mind for MommyVerbs. Ok, off to the dashboard. Really appreciate the help and feedback.
You can also have a widget that shows all your tags x
You already have an archive widget up, so folks should be able to find older posts fairly easily. If they’re having trouble finding posts on a particular subject, then yes, as Glitter Mama suggested, using more specific categories/tags will help.
For example, your most recent post looks like its sort of a music/movie review (sorry, I just scanned it), but it’s tagged Daily Post and Things I Do. If I’m a reader looking for more of what you’ve got to say about music/movies, there’s no way I’m going to be able to find it.
And yes, when you tag a post, readers can click on your tags, and it will bring up all the posts that share that tag. Or if you have a search field on your blog, readers could type in whatever subject they’re looking for, and will find posts featuring that tag.
Thanks. I will agree I haven’t figured out tagging and categorizing yet. It is truly a wonder anyone can find anything! Ha! So, what are pages good for? I guess I was envisioning a way of organizing a little better. I blog about a lot of different things, but it usually ties back to kids, mommyhood, parenting, with a few just about my stuff thrown it. Now that it is growing up and I’m a little in love with it, I just want it to work for me and to share with others. Really appreciate the help from you and Glitter Mama!,
You can also use pages to accomplish this, but not all themes allow you to do this. For example, you could have your posts listed chronologically on the first page, then you could have pages with the various categories, which would be linked from the main page.
That may be the way you decide to go, but not sure if having a page dedicated to “things I do” is going to help your readers find the topics they’re looking for, so I would work on making the categories more specific.
I agree. I jumped into the deep end with this project and started tagging and creating categories before I knew what I was doing. Great feedback. One thing at a time…the pages sound a little difficult and maybe for another day.:-) I’m assuming to fix old posts, I just go in and edit the categories and update?
Yes, just edit the post and add categories. This will help folks find you from outside your blog, too.
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the help! Off to the dashboard!
I agree with Glitter Mama and Karen above on adding category widgets on the right-hand side, but also–at least for me as a blog reader–I like having some sort of a menu at the top of the blog (I feel quite constricted if I don’t see that, automatically). Basically, it would just offer another way to navigate your blog, in addition to all the options on the right-hand side. So, on my blog, for example, the top-of-the-page menu options are the five main categories I assign to all of my blogs (in addition to the more specific sub-categories and tags and the “About Me” menu option). The side-bar widgets allow for a more nuanced navigation, but this top menu is still helpful.
Thanks for the feedback…I like the idea of a menu or pages set up with different verbs (the focus of my writing)..but I don’t think my theme offers that option? Or I just haven’t figured it out yet. If you don’t mind..I just went in and renamed the categories for my posts..wondering if that makes it any easier to tell what is there. I’m open to feedback! Thanks for taking the time to offer suggestions! I love this community!
Would love some feedback on my blog regarding layout etc and if its easy to navigate and find what you want. Thanks
It was too easy. The category list you have on the side bar allowed me to click into posts ideas that interests me. I think the layout works fine.
Yay so glad to hear that, thank you
) x
I agree. Your blog is very well organized and easy to navigate.
Just two thoughts:
1) Perhaps my brain is odd, but, as a reader, I have come to expect to see some navigation options at the top of the blog–like on the line you have “About”–all the rest of the space could also have the categories as well (although, of course, you have them on the side–this would be another way to read on).
2) On the main page, each individual blog post shows up in full as you scroll down. When I arrive at blogs for the first time, I like to scroll through–just to get a sense of the content. I think I’d see more of the content if these each individual blog just showed a glimpse of it–with the option to “read more”. I’d be more likely to click through and, also, to look further down. Also, I am no expert on WordPress–but I wonder if you’d then get more meaningful stats data (people looking at individual blogs, rather than your main page).
Thannk you so much. I recently changed from the read more to show all, and was thinking I should change back so you’ve helped, I think I’ll change it
Yeh I want more pages at the top but my wordpress theme makes it very awkward :/ Thanks so much, very helpful x
I really like your blog! You have a new follower!
Very easy to navigate–and the layout really captures my attention. Good job!
My blog is: http://www.onesockon.com and I would love feedback on how to protect my photography and a general review of if you think it’s easy to navigate. I just switched to this current theme from MistyLook.
watermark your photos and put a disclaimer/copyright thing on your blog too
I had to hunt for the categories; found the Galleries too broad of a stroke as I still wasn’t sure what I would be seeing. I have seen other bloggers put watermarks on their art; however, it does take away from the image. It seems that once the eye sees words, it keeps returning to them.
It is my opinion that it is not possible to protect anything posted on the internet. Images, words, links, can all be lifted off the screen. Posting disclaimers and copyrights will provide a legal reaction if you discover someone stealing, but they truly are not a strong deterrent.
I think the layout you have chosen is great for highlighting your recent posts…but I would suggest adding category tabs to make easy to locate photos I may find interesting…ie: people, pets, kids, etc.
Hi, here is my little blog http://englishmaninitaly.wordpress.com/ for me it is a bit of fun. I enjoy the interaction with other bloggers. I would welcome, your criticism.
I actually signed up to follow your blog, it’s very funny! But how about more photos of where you live ? I’ve been to Italy, just once, and I always love more photos of Italy.
Hi Peter, Thanks I will add more photos of Italy. I should carry my camera around more often.
Thanks for the feedback
I am new to blogging and would love constructive feedback. I think my focus is making sure all of the content is consistent with my photographs? I would also like it if someone good tell me if my post are too long and as the reader you just get tired of reading? You can find me at
http://sincerelylakesh.wordpress.com/ I am looking forward to hearing from you. Oh and feel free to comment anything else that you notice. Thanks!
I’ve only been doing this for six months–and I struggle with the worry that my blogs are too long as well, but, as a reader, I really didn’t think that your posts were too long.
Like the one on the Baptisim of Ohrid Lake–I enjoyed it very much, but I would suggest naming it something more descriptive. “Sunday Funnies and Other Stories” don’t tell the reader much–the baptism seems to be the centerpiece of this post, so why not mention it specifically in the title?
Also, the pictures are great–and you do a good job presenting/framing them in your blog. I wonder thought if some of the longer paragraphs in that blog would be more “livelier” with a smaller (medium-sized) picture on the side of the paragraph. So there isn’t too much unbroken text–there is an image to encourage people reading. Just a thought.
Also. My reading habit is to scan a new blog–just scroll down on its main page. You have the entirety of your posts showing now. Perhaps more of your posts would catch people’s attention if only a small [top] part of them appeared to whet the appetite.
I look forward to reading more from you!
Your amazing and thank you. I have to figure out how to minimize my post. I hear you on being more descriptive and will have to process how I can do that without losing “sunday funnies etc”. Perhaps, it will work better as a category as opposed to a vague title. smile. Thanks again.
On my theme, minimizing posts was an option I clicked on at some point during setup.
OH! And I know exactly what you mean about awesome series! I had this series in the beginning that I thought would be awesome: Wistful Mondays, but I found that just distracted from people finding the posts (maybe these series would be meaningful later, when we are famous?). On your Sunday Funnies, perhaps you could add a colon each time and then mention the specific place you are writing about? With my “Wistful Mondays”, I just made that a category, eventually, and gave up the whole title to the actual place.
I totally hear what you are saying and I think being more descriptive so this way I can get more reader traffic. It started as being descriptive and then I felt that it was not working. So I added the category ugh…I will try adding the colon and seeing how I feel about it.
How do you make only the top portion of your post visible to whet the appetite? I’ve seen that around and I’d like to do that with the posts on my blog. Is it a theme, or a specific setting on my dashboard?
This is a reply to Janine Hoffman. I couldn’t find a link to your blog so I reply here. You have two options to do that: Either you chose a theme, like Oxygen or Origin … they are made up that way. OR … while writing your post, there’s an icon in the tool bar called «Insert more Tag». Click that one where you want to break up your post and you’ll get the «continue reading»… Hope this helps.
Thank you Rebekah!! I really appreciate your taking the time to help me. You bloggers out there are all so nice and supportive 😊
I was given, The Eastern Orthodox Religion, by the random button. I did not get tired of reading as the images broke up the reading rather well.
Thank you again. I am looking forward to reading more of your post. Umm, what random button?
Up in the left corner, there is a print of your blog name. Hold your mouse pointer over the name of your blog and a drop-down should appear. The random button is near the bottom of the drop-down menu. It says, “Random Post.” Click on that phrase and the site will present a post at random from the blog you are on.
Interesting. I will check it out. Thank you.
Take Care Of You.
I’ve been reading over all the comments for the past 10 mins…and what can i say? i’m as punch drunk as i was the first time i posted my first ever blog (if you can call it that) I’m such a newbie with everything and looks to me that everybody here can give me a lot of help! All i wanted is a space for me to write down anything and everything i would not want to forget or something i want to recall, memories, emotions, something i overheard or read about. I had 5 likes on my previous post and i feel so proud of myself that someone took the time to read. I would really appreciate it so much if you can give me tips and pointers and i would really love to see positive criticism (is that even a correct term?) and i’m sorry if my english is not really grand and correct, it’s not my first language. I’m a Filipina and my native tongue sometimes gets the better off me. i’m looking forward to reading your comments soon. Have fun everyone!
I took a quick look at you site…. I’ve only been blogging a little over a year but it took me a long time to learn some ins and outs. I would suggest you put on an ‘About’ page. Not too much information but a little about yourself and what you probably will blog about…It doesn’t have to be only on one subject…I blog on pretty well anything that comes to mind. But it gives the reader a place to know a little.
Next install a ‘tag cloud’ in your sidebar… This gives the reader the option of finding blogs with certain subjects or ‘tags’. I didn’t learn the importance of tags for some time after beginning so I thought I would mention that…It’s how people find you too as well as Categories.
I can’t now remember everything on your home page…memory is short but do you have a ‘follow me’ on your sidebar? These sidebars are done by Appearance, Widgets…but you maybe already know that.
Just a few suggestions….I’m still learning myself…Diane
I would love some feedback on my blog’s posts http://funkystorm.wordpress.com/
Likes are always wonderful but I really want to know what people think and what I can do to improve as I continue to write. So constructive feedback would be lovely. ^_^
I like the typewriter aesthetics of your blog, but perhaps some color or photography would make it more striking?
Hi, my blog is at culturallife.wordpress.com
I am unsure about whether the content my blog ‘grabs’ people and makes them want to read more or whether I am trying to cover too many topics on one blog.
Also, I’ve been thinking about changing the layout, wondering about removing the tag cloud and adding an index of different topics (e.g. separate areas for movie reviews) along the top.
So, yeah, I’d really appreciate feedback on my blog content and layout.
I agree, the tag cloud takes up a lot of space, and you already have the category cloud. What would the index of topics look like? (at least it would seem confusing–outside of the WordPress world, I think people may wonder what is the difference between the category cloud and the tag cloud–or maybe it’s just me).
I was not overwhelmed by the breadth of your topics, but I think they would be signaled better right away if you added the most important menu options at the top of the blog (where you have Home, About, and Disclaimer). When I look at a new blog, that’s where I turn to for a brief definition of everything available to me.
Finally, I am not very active on twitter, so perhaps I am not the best person to comment on this, but having twitter comments above the more navigational Blog Archive and Cultural Life Calendar takes up valuable real estate, I think. It brings more attention to how to interact with your content in a different system, while underplaying how to navigate your content in the system you are already in. Just my reaction.
Oh–and Finally-Finally–is there an option to simply search your blog? I think that should be up top, together with ways to sign up for notifications.
Hi, Transplantedtater. Thanks for your feedback. It’s really helpful.
Oops, I meant ‘category cloud’, not ‘tag cloud’. I don’t think there is such a thing as a ‘tag cloud’! My fault….I was typing in a rush. Sorry if I confused you!
Yep, I’ll remove the category cloud. I was planning on adding pages along the top, under the header photo. So I would have a ‘header’ page (e.g. one labeled ‘Movie reviews’) with drop-down sections of different categories below each page. And the index pages would be at the top, along the bar with the Home, About and Disclaimer pages, like you suggested.
Thanks for the advice about the twitter feed too. I’m really grateful for the comments and advice.
I do have a search option – it’s at the very top of the blog, in line with the title. Bu perhaps it’s not very noticeable…maybe I should move it.
P.S. Sorry I made a typo in your name in my previous reply. I wish there was a way to edit comments I make!
Grace, I am sorry, I didn’t notice the “Search” option at the top–yes, there it is. I guess I missed it because I just scrolled down right away for the main part of the blog.
No problem about the typo–I feel the same about the edit function!
On your blog, you do have a tag cloud–and it’s quite long. Now that I look at the category and tag clouds–probably the tag cloud is more descriptive (especially if you re thinking of getting rid of the category cloud), but maybe you could limit it to fewer words?
I think it would be helpful to add the categories–and just more options at the top of the blog. I look forward to reading your upcoming posts!
I’m extremely new to blogging and could use any constructive criticism you find on my blog page. Please tell me the general feel you get when you visit and what I could do to attract more viewers and viewer interaction. The page is FoxySilverGal.com hosted at wordpress.com. Thanks so much in advance
When I go to your site and scroll down the posts, words “happy with myself,” “confident,” “powerful” (especially from these posts: http://foxysilvergal.com/2013/01/24/and-who-said-greygray-hair-cant-be-foxy-and-fierce/ and, despite the challenges, http://foxysilvergal.com/2013/01/24/watching-ziggy-grow/), and “beautiful” come to mind. One thought came to mind: On your home page, under your “Foxy Silver Gal” header and by the “About me” line on the right-hand side, I wonder if it would be possible to put a picture of you–something that would create an instant visual connection with you (like your Gravatar, for example).
Oh, thank you, thank you. I think I can do that. So, I’m on the right track, yes?
Took your advice. Done. Please check it out now. Also changed the titles on the posts to make them more WIIFM appealing. Additional comments welcomed. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
http://foxysilvergal.com/
When I tried to access your site there was no way to get past the Title ?? I saw something about Go Daddy..?? but no instructions at all…
Oh. Sorry about that. I think just clicking on the name above..foxysilvergal, takes you to it. At least it did when I tried it.
Thanks for trying.
I tried to copy and paste the link into this post, but for some reason, not working either. Oh well. Thanks.
My blog can be found at:
http://www.foxysilvergal.com
Thank you to those who have taken a look. Feedback would be very helpful.
Something is wrong because that link still only takes you to a page where one can go nowhere else… Maybe because you are the owner of the site you get in but I’m sure not…I would check with WP or Go Daddy if that is your host…
Okay. Will do. Thank you for trying.
OMG! I can’t believe it. Is my blog so terrible that no-one is willing to take a look and offer comments on how I can make it better. Thank you writerwannebe763 for trying. Thank you transplantedtatar for your suggestion. I made a couple of changes, but really would appreciate other opinions as well.
I have just tried to enter your site and I couldn’t sorry http://www.foxysilvergal.com/ all I get is the home page and no way to see any posts. I did try
I guess the problem is still there. So sorry. Guess I’ll have to contact Go Daddy. Find out the problem. My bad. Thank you.
I got in just fine, first try…and it is a wonderful site for fashion tips, etc….I would make one or two recommendations…..first that is an awful lot of black….can you change the very back background to something more colorful, such as yourself?? lol and also, I’m older, using Granny glasses now, and I have a lot of trouble reading white letters on a black background…. for some reason my brain doesn’t read them well…and I must re-read continually….which is a pain. So maybe just alter your colors a bit in the posts, to lighten it up…and it would be fine. Good luck!!!!
Thank you very much. I’ll look into those changes. I don’t know the access problem, but have contacted WP about it. Glad you were able to get in. I need all the help I can get. Thanks so much.
Hi, all! My blog can be found at http://www.xmelissalittle.wordpress.com. There are a couple of things that I’d like to get everyone’s opinion on (please comment here opposed to my blog).
1. The views, likes and comments on my blog are not steady throughout any given week. One day I might receive 70 views and the next day I might only get 4 views. I have only been blogging for 3 months now. Is this normal or can you find something that I may be doing wrong?
2. After taking a look at my Categories and skimming over a couple of posts, where do you feel my strength lies? Like most here, I am an aspiring author and I’d really like to know what readers enjoy hearing from me the most.
Thank you so much!
I love all your posts tbh, writing is lovely
) The views-are you commenting on other blogs? Also when you are writing your posts, try find the option slug…..you can change the info, im bad at explaining but basically if you have a post titled ”My fave beauty products” you could instead change the bit in the address bar as ”fave-rimmel-beauty-products” sorry if that makes no sence at all lol! google it x
Glitter Mama: Yep, I am totally dumbfounded so I will have to Google that. LOL! Yes, I do comment on other blogs, but maybe I should be commenting more. Thank you so very much for taking the time to check out my blog and give nice feedback. I appreciate it! x0
Hi.
I have been blogging for a year and a half and I experience similar trends with my blog. Sometimes there is a real drought in terms of my blog stats and comments. Then I’ll post something about a particular topic and my stats will rocket. I think that’s pretty normal for most bloggers and I wouldn’t be concerned about it.
Addressing your second question, I had a look at a few of your categories (“Personal” appealed to me – I enjoy reading stories about other peoples’ lives) and your writing is very powerful. Your writing about your mother moved me. I’m sorry for your loss.
I enjoyed browsing through the “Inspiration” category. This post (http://xmelissalittle.wordpress.com/2012/12/31/a-dream-dignity-and-dedication/) caught my attention. I enjoyed the picture with the famous phrase, followed by your interpretation and thoughts about it. Definitely do more posts like that! Including photos and images add visual appeal to readers.
Hello, Grace!
Thank you for the wonderful feedback. I’m glad to know that the trends are normal and that I’m not “old news” just yet.
It does seem like it’s all about the topic or even the title. My day for the most views was when I wrote something called, “Ignorant N***er”. I’m sure it was definitely the title that sparked interest.
I’m glad that you enjoyed the “Personal” category. I really do enjoy writing about things that have happened in my life so that I may help someone else who could be going through something similar.
The “Inspiration” category is getting bigger. I seem to have steered that way lately. I do enjoy helping people to see their worth and potential.
I will be sure to add more photos to my blog.
Thank you, again, for your help. xo
No problem.
I really like this new Community Pool idea. It’s great for us bloggers to socialize.
Yep, I noticed that post and the title made me stop and read it. A bit of controversy always gets people talking!
Happy blogging!
Views are inconsistent even at their best. The most effective way I’ve found to increase your visibility is to make virtual “friends.” Read and comment and follow other blogs. Not only do those virtual relationships help increase your blog traffic, they also leave you with a fellow blogger to learn from and encourage.
I loved your blog so much that I am now following you and looking forward to reading more! I especially liked what you wrote about your family or recent experiences. They were relevant and fun to read.
Kaela, thanks so much for your input. I have realized that I need to comment on more blogs and have started do so first thing this morning.
I’m glad you enjoyed some of the posts from my blog. There’s always something goofy going on in my household.
I am following you now as well. I was hooked when I read the post about your baby girls birthday. How special! Oh, and your About page was awesome too!
So very nice to meet you and I look forward to chatting with you more. xo
always like constructive input on my blogs
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Hello, my blog is luciustheninja.wordpress.com and I would love some general feedback on my writing style and maybe getting more people to comment? Thanks much!
Hello, I am three days old in blogger world but I had a look at your blog and this is just what struck me. In terms of the writing it reads well but maybe you are trying to fit too much into your posts, nothing is ever gone into detail so I do not really get a feel of who you are. I hope that makes sense, I have had no coffee and thus may be intelligible. Regarding comments, if you post on others blogs they are likely to come look at yours and give a reciprocal comment.
Thanks that is great advice! I feel as if I am writing that way sometimes as well. I’ve been trying to improve. Thanks for checking me out!
Ok, many thanks to those who offered help earlier. I have now gone in and reorganized the categories to better sort my posts. Would someone be willing to take a look and see if that makes it any easier to navigate? I’m open to suggestions and ideas…www.mommyverbs.wordpress.com
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Thanks! I hope it will help folks find topics of interest. And can I just say one more time, how much I love this blogging world!? Such a friendly, helpful place! Best wishes blogger friends!
Hey my blog is : http://sophiebowns.wordpress.com/
Any feedback would be great !
or you can contact me on Twitter! https://twitter.com/Sophie_Bowns
I didn’t read much since I’m not really in the market for some fiction, but your layout is nice and the font is good too. It might be an idea to use different photos – if I was following you on my dashboard I would think that I have already read your post as I had seen the photo before.
I just started a personal blog, where I kind of just let my thoughts spill. General feedback would be good. I don’t really know where I’m taking it yet, other than talking about topics that actually interest me, like art, literature, poetry, photography, world events, among some things. http://conamorelucy.wordpress.com Thank you!
I LOVE the title and the subtitle of your blog! I think, once you have more content, it would be helpful to have some navigational aides at the top or to the side, helping people find past posts of yours they may like.
Thanks! The theme I have right now doesn’t allow for widgets at the sides or top, and I really like this theme, so I don’t think I might change that. I will however, try to find ways to make navigation easier. Thanks for your feedback!
I agree with the other commenter. I think you should just keep posting about whatever is of interest to you. I think your blog is fun and I am now a follower.
Thank you! I will take that into consideration, I will check your blog out as well!
I took a quick look at your site and I think it would be helpful to add some ‘widgets’ to your sidebars…. such as ‘tag cloud’ or ‘category cloud’ and the ‘follow me’ up top rather than the bottom… Make sure and ‘tag’ each post well and ‘category’ so people can find you and then find other posts they may want to check out. There are a few more ‘widgets’ such as ‘top posts’ or ‘most recent posts’ etc. which all help draw people to maybe check out a few when they visit…. Just some thoughts…I’ve only been at it for about a year and I’m still learning myself…Diane
My theme doesn’t allow for widgets at the top or sides, just the bottom. I will take your advice to add categories, as I will be going off into different topics. Thanks for your feedback!
My theme doesn’t allow for widgets at the top or sides, just the bottom. I will take your advice to add categories, as I will be going off into different topics. Thanks for your feedback!
I would guess that you know that you can change your theme to one with 2 or 3 columns but prefer not too?
Yes ma’am. I love this theme.
I really love your “Who’s Lucy?” page! Your page doesn’t offer a lot of scenery or things to click on, but your words take over the entire page anyhow. What I mean by that is, with just your words, you painted an awesome picture of yourself that I could see clearly. Keep up the great work!
Thank you so much! That’s sweet of you!
I really like what you did with the Balloons theme: I used to have that one, but I didn’t like that the widgets were on the bottom, that’s the only thing that makes it somewhat unusable for me. But I really like how you’ve customized it! I think you’re doing well as far as content goes, and I enjoyed your about me page. I agree though that having widgets on the top and sides encourages click throughs and more exploration of your page. If you would rather stick with the same theme, that would be good too, but maybe looking for other options would be good to consider.
Thanks, I’ll consider it. I think I like it where it is right now. Maybe when the blog grows, I’ll go ahead and look for other options. Right now I’m happy with the way it is.
That’s understandable. I loved the theme myself, and like I said, I really like what you’ve done to customize it.
Thank you, Samantha!
I need help on where to find images, again feedback is what I like so I can be a better blogger, also what are the advantages of having a public domain would be appreciated, and how do I make my font larger than is present on my blog, thanks for all your help! Write on!
ok, my favorite source for royalty free stock images is stock.xchng Here’s a link http://www.sxc.hu/
Also, http://www.freedigitalphotos.net/
Here is one place to get images: http://www.reusableart.com/
thanks for giving me the web site for pics. I will put more effort into my next blog which I am getting ready to do!
Thanks for helping me with the website for pics, you are very sweet, getting ready to do my daily blog, about what I think is better than sliced bread!
I asked about a larger font size once and was told only if you do an ‘upgrade’ can you do this…
My blog is made up of my life it’s total randomness. http://nolagirlatheart.wordpress.com/ I would love to hear what you think; What you like, what you don’t like..Thank you for taking the time!
I found the layout threw me, did not know where to look or go. Your photos are wonderful though.
Thanks for taking the time to reply…I have been looking for a new layout.
Hi everyone! I would love some feedback on my blog, http://adaywithdepression.wordpress.com
What do you think of the layout, banner, & colors? Is it easy to navigate? Are there any additional widgets you would recommend?
What do you think of my writing? Is it easy to read and understand? How can I make my posts more interesting? Is their length okay? How can I engage readers more and encourage comments?
You are welcome to comment here or on specific posts. All constructive criticism very welcome!
thanks,
Ziya
I like your blog and I am now a folllower. I think you might want to break up some of your longer posts with photos or clip art. The only way I know to get more comments is to find blogs you like and leave comments. If you have conversations with others bloggers that you like, they will also converse with you. I hope this helps.
Sorry that I misspelled follower
Thanks so much for your advice. I’ll give breaking up my longer posts with images a try. I also look forward to participating a bit more in the blogging community. There are a lot of great writers on WordPress; sometimes I think I just need to push myself a little to comment on the great stuff I get to read.
I would just like to say that a fellow blogger and friend recently changed to WP.org and now wishes she hadn’t because she didn’t understand what some of the changes would mean to her…She wasn’t well enough informed which was her responsibility but she had a third party ‘helping’. So when I tried to find out information about this from WP.com they said that she needed to go to WP.Org for help…But this person said she would never suggest changing to a site without being knowledgeable about how to take care of your own site.
As a side note…my friend now wants to go back and from what I’m reading that is just as complex…. So maybe to others …beware!…
Thanks!
You’re welcome…my friend thought she knew what was involved but she has found out differently and not being too knowledgeable about these things she jumped into it too fast….Now it’s going to be a process to get things back …Diane
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Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts on my blog…
I’m a fairly new to the blogging world and was looking to get a little feedback on the structure of my blog. This is mostly outlined here: http://lifeaccordinglee.wordpress.com/about-this-blog/ but feel free to browse through my posts to get a sense of what I mean. I just feel like each category I have is attracting one type of reader instead of readers who are interested in my blog as a whole. Is this a bad thing? Should I try to become more niche-oriented? I would be looking to change this soon before I get too far into my blog, so please let me know what you think.
Any comments welcome, my blog is just my thoughts on life and a portal to update my family and friends on my travels and adventures. Sometimes it feels very egotistical but any feedback on structure, content, SEO or anything that stands out would be welcome, many thanks
I think that a bit of variety makes for an interesting blog. I do not think you should have a narrow focus. You will attract more readers who love your whole blog in time.
I would love to get feedback on my blog. It is very generic (just 1.5 months old) and I am just trying to find my voice, style and subjects to write about. I would still love to get advice or feedback on how to improve what I am already doing. My blog is http://beyondbeautytips.wordpress.com/
Thank you in advance
I enjoyed your blog. I think you have a real niche hailing from India and utilizing this will be very beneficial as niche blogs tend to take off very well. This is especially true if they are targeted to the right audiences. Congrats on getting so many followers so fast! Several ways you could improve would be to add some more pictures to your main page and also a personal picture and some links to your gravitar. There are many occasions when people leave no pictures on their gravitars and this impersonal piece will make it difficult for anyone to recognize when you have liked their posts or if you are a regular frequenter of other blogs they frequent which would in turn bring more potential readers and future followers with similar interests back to your own blog. I can tell very quickly that you have a great passion for your country in your blog and I would let that shine in its design with pictures of items or places that have interested you related to India. Cool blog and hope this helps!
Thank you for your wonderful feedback and advice. I have noted the points you’ve mentioned and will be making necessary changes soon. I just opened up your website, your pic on your About page is hilarious. I love to have a good laugh so I am following you now. See you around and thank you again for taking out time to read my blog!
I’m brand new to WordPress, but have been writing and blogging for a while now. I’m moving my main site over to WordPress and would like any feedback on either the format (seems to have some difficulties in Internet Explorer) and on any ways to improve my writing or engage more readers. My site is primarily humor, but has become a hodgepodge of various topics. I’m also not an English major and would like any feedback on grammar or even excellent resources I could check out. I’ve studied Strunk and White and other books on grammar, but still need loads of improvement. Thanks!
Another good resource may be checking out some stylebooks, like Associated Press or Chicago Manual of Style. It can give you a good idea of how things should be written, how words should be hyphenated or not, etc.
Hi,
I’m absolutely new to blogging and wish to write a mini-novel in my blog.
I’d love to hear what you all have to say about my writing. Please check it out.
Also, i believe in sharing techniques and styles. So, you’re welcome to share your opinion and i hope we help each other in growing mutually as good bloggers.
Cheers!
Hey!
I’ve started a new blog, and I’ve finally found an area of focus but I’m not exactly sure what areas of interest to zero in on, or what readers would be interested in? I’ve recently taken a vow of celibacy for a year,and intend on writing about my experiences and thoughts along the way. Any type of feedback would be appreciated! Happy blogging everyone.
Andie
I have a question. What’s the deal with blog awards? I’ve received a few and they make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside but they are a lot of work! Thoughts?
It’s well worth the work to share blogs you like with other people…..I tend to ignore the rules on telling people seven interesting things about yourself or answering questions about my favourite colour…that’s just icing.
the cake is the sharing.
Good point, Helen. Thanks.
Hey!
I’ve started travel blogging for about 4 months now. At first, it was just a way to update friends and family about my adventures. Only recently, I fell in love with writing and I’ve decided to go serious with it. So I would love some constructive feedback about my writing and if my blog serve the purpose of a travel blog. Here’s my blog http://whenmisshoggyleaveshome.wordpress.com/.
Thanks guys.
Miss Hoggy.
I have recently started blogging at http://www.broweny237.com
My focus is on travel, and to a lesser extent sport and music. I would really like some feedback on my approach and how I might get my posts noticed.
Thanks
browney237
I’ve been blogging for many years now but have never managed to garner many comments, likes and/or follows and was wondering if it’s because I blog about a huge range of topics (gadgets, books, food, personal life events etc.) rather than a specific niche area. (Or maybe it’s just that my writing isn’t anything to, well, write home about).
What do you guys look for when you consider following a blog? Would you only follow one that writes primarily about the one niche area that attracted you to read it in the first place?
ps. Also, any other constructive comments about my blog would be more than welcome! I know a blog is a personal space for me to do what I want but I also hope to be able to entertain people who happen to pass by it
http://pokemymon.wordpress.com
Just wanting to know if there is anyway to have the comments or suggestions posted on wordpress for me instead of on my e-mail.
On your blog go to Setting>Discussion Settings and uncheck the box under E-mail me whenever Anyone posts a comment.
okay Chris under discussion I removed people making comments via email and has to be done via moderator, and I also removed the check at the bottom of the community pool. so I hope this will do it, thanks so much, partner!
you’re welcome. I hope that works for you.
it didn’t
if you want to stop emails from this post in community pool, there is a link in each email. at the bottom of the email click. Want less email? Modify your Subscription Options.It will take you to a page with all the post comments you are following.
Find the post you want to stop following, check the box and hit delete or use the drop down menu to stop following.
Hi. I am a recent active blogger on wordpress. I like to share my thoughts. Sometimes its in the form of poetry, and at other times its just random thoughts, or articles that I have liked. I feel my blog isn’t very organised. Can someone suggest me apt categories (I have a lot of posts piled up, so its confusing :/) For now, I have used lots of them, but it doesn’t look very nice.
Here is the link:
Have a look please. I hope you’ll like something.
http://au1688.wordpress.com/
Suggestions/ feedback awaited!
I reblog the entries that I want readers to read first.
Any alternatives for that? 
might I join as well? thanks guys
http://ruthlesslancelotcalliope.wordpress.com/
Hi all, I am very new to blogging; my blog is an ancient three days old. It is there to regale mine and my partners life adventures, hence the title – Allnutt is our surname, not some rude reference
. I imagine it will mainly be travel and funny stories. As we housesit its also there so people who may want us to sit can find out more about us.
http://allnuttadventures.wordpress.com/
Be gentle, please.
I like your blog! Adding the map to the house hunting post was a good idea. I have a general idea of where places are in the UK, but I will often just check a map just to be sure. Having renovated a 100 year old house, it will be interesting to read how you like updating your house. Good luck!
Hi Peter, thank you for replying and glad you like the blog. Adding the map came to me at the last minute, I know my awareness of other countries geography isnt that great so figured not everyone is going to know the layout of south england. Ours is 100 years old too! There will certainly be posts about the renovations. Best wishes,
Just a general question about word count — do any of you limit the word count for your own posts or the posts you read when browsing? I’ve been trying to limit mine to under 500 words, but it can be hard to say much of anything in that length post.
I don’t worry about word count unless I feel like I’m rambling. It is my opinion that if the topic is interesting and every sentence/word is necessary, it will hold the reader’s attention even if it is a bit long. Good luck!
I do not limit word count. I say what I intend to and if the post looks busy with words, add an image or two to provide relief. I believe if a post is truly interesting the reader will continue reading; however, if you feel the post is too long, you can always part it out and join with links.
I would love any feedback on appearance–what looks good, what doesn’t. Writing is my first love, so any input on content and whether it holds your attention or not would be lovely! It’s hard to get honest feedback from people who know you.
Thank you! http://www.kaelamoore.wordpress.com
I love the photography on your page for the most part. The header photo is not particularly eye-catching, but once you begin reading and scrolling through the content I really enjoy it. I thought the post about Parenting Lessons was great, especially with the photos of your daughter to complement it. Otherwise, I enjoy the layout and the content quite a bit…I think you’re doing pretty well.
Thank you for taking the time to look, Samantha! I agree about the header photo. I think I need to change it.
Hi! I would love feedback on my blog. I mostly write poetry, but you will find some quotes and stories tossed in there too. Any comments or likes would be greatly appreciated. My blog is http://www.littlewordworm.wordpress.com
I just started a blog and I am in need of comment and suggestions To get more readers.
This is my blog http://livingmeansgrowing.blogspot.nl/?m=1
I’m a brand new blogger. I started a few months ago, but only have five posts. I have a hard time squeezing in time to write because I’m a bit of a perfectionist. I’m challenging myself to write shorter posts.
Thanks so much!
I haven’t been brave enough to tell more than a handful of people about my blog, therefore I’m lacking in views and comments. I’d like to get ANY input….don’t worry about hurting my feelings!
Rhonda, challenge yourself by releasing a post which isn’t perfected up to your highest standards. Also, in order to hold yourself accountable for releasing more posts, brainstorm some subjects that you would like to write about, then make a calendar to show which dates you would like to release each a blog based on each of those ideas. The blogging community is pretty relaxed, and even though it is important to only release something which you feel comfortable with, don’t over scrutinize your work. Also, some advice that I received recently from another community pool viewer was to maybe divide my posts up so they won’t be as long. Maybe you could try that, as well. I hope something I said was helpful! =)
These are very good suggestions….I like the calendar idea. I actually have MANY ideas scribbled into a notebook, so coming up with ideas isn’t my problem…Worrying that no one cares about what I’m saying is one problem.
That and just the busy-busy of life that eats up my time.
Funny thing about dividing up posts….Two of my longest posts actually originated as one post….I divided them and they are STILL long! Brevity has never been my strong point, but I’m working on it! Thank you for the suggestions. I’ll go check out your blog, now!
I definitely agree with not striving for perfection. Definitely look over your work to make sure everything makes sense and to check for typos/grammatical/spelling errors, but don’t overanalyze it. It looks like you are providing good content, just take steps to increase traffic to your blog: posting here, participating in the Weekly Writing Challenge, reading and commenting on other blogs, utilizing Facebook/Twitter and other social media to get the word out.
Good luck! 
Thank you for the suggestions! I will check out your blog tonight! Thanks again!
Rhonda,
Your experience is fairly normal for first time bloggers. When I started blogging, I wrote one post a month or so and I was concerned about being prefect… Be patient and compassionate with yourself and realize that blogging is a great way to work on improving our writing not delivering show pieces at every turn. Heck, you can edit a post, make corrections, change information after the fact so go easy on yourself. As for comments, visit and comment on other blogs, make a number of regular blog friends, build you social media presence and some will reciprocate.
best wishes,
E
Thank you! These are great suggestions and things I’m trying to do. It can be quite time consuming, but I’ll get there! As for the pursuit of perfection, the people who know me know me as someone who finds every little mistake (I don’t try, they just seem to jump out at me everywhere I go!), so it feels like some are ready to pounce on every mistake I make. I read each post so many times before I hit “publish” that I’m usually so sick of it by the time I do, I don’t even like it anymore. Ha ha. But, even so, I’ve had typos pointed out 2 or three times already. So, I guess my obsessing might just be a waste of time…or worse, it works against me. By the time I’ve edited a thousand times it all runs together and it’s easy to miss stuff. This is more information than you wanted or needed…again, brevity is not my strong suit.
Thank you for your input! It really helps!
TY! It’s all good. We are allowed to make mistakes and perfection is not required for blogging success. Keep in mind that the best, most successful writers in the market place often have a team of editors combing through their work. The great thing about blogging is we can go back and correct our errors. I’m glad this helped and I look forward to seeing you shine in your blogging efforts.
All the best!
Eliz
Tehe! I counted a few typos on my comments, so relax… To err is human…
Ha,ha, I’m so proud…I didn’t even notice your typos!
Hi, bloggers! This is the first time I comment in tDP. I might call myself an old blogger as I have had several personal blogs over the years. But still, I feel as a novice! I really encourage all newcomers to brace this wonderful world with enthusiasm. I always say blogs are MUCH better than social networks. See, Facebook, Twitter and almost all of the like promotes inmediatism, content-to-be-forgotten. Just try to find what you wrote on your favorite social netwrok last year by this date and you’ll see how difficult it is.
So, as someone that really believes in blogging, I made a move last year. I created a blog for my 11 years old daughter, so she can start creating her own storyline in their own space. Do you think that’s a good idea? Is there anyone over here that has the same idea? If so, how do you coach your children to blog? What are the best tools to help them love blogging by themselves?
My blog and my daughter’s are both in Spanish, but if there’s someone willing to visit or comment, here are the links: http://40limon.es (mine) http://soyvielka.com (My prioncess’).
Blessing to all!
So… nobody has the same concern than me?
Not that I’m begging for attention, but I thought this topic would be interesting to discuss too. C’mon, guys, share your wisdom on this matter with me 
Thanks!
Hello! I’m back for more. I would like some feedback in general on my blog: appearance, functionality, my Pages, and blog content. If you stumbled across my blog, which elements would grab your attention, and which would turn you off, if any? I am looking for any feedback and what would make you comment on it. I’ll make sure to comment/leave feedback for any who does for me and look through the comments here. Thank you!
http://donewithcollege.wordpress.com
Hello, I like your blog. Living in England I am always interested to read about life in small town America. One thing I did think was that your subscribe box could benefit by being above the twitter feed – less scrolling that way. Sorry to not be that helpful, I did subscribe though
.
Thank you, I think that’s a good idea
Thanks for subscribing!
hello everyone…!!!
i have a blog with my personal photography portfolio and i would like to get some feedback for my photos…
so feel free to visit…follow…share or comment at :
http://pavloszikos.wordpress.com/
Your photos are very interesting, but I think your blog would be more approachable if you made the main page (the one you see when you go to pavloszikos.wordpress.com) a page of photos, rather than the about me page.
Typically when I go to a blog, I like to see examples of their content to see if it interests me before I click through to find out about the blog author.
hi Jen! thank you for your feedback!i think you are right for the main page of my blog…maybe i should change it with the recent posts or even better with the top-click posts! the structure of my blog is similar to a company’s site…where you find first the company’s profile and after its products&services.
thank you again!
have a nice day!
-Pavlos-
I was hoping that someone might kindly let me know what they think about the design/layout for my blog here:
http://tenwordstory.wordpress.com/
I have been having problems choosing one and don’t know if I should go with this or a one column one with a wide width that puts the content on center stage. Also, if you have any other thoughts or concerns, I would be very grateful to hear them.
Thanks,
Misanthropic Muse
I think the format you have right now is a good one. It allows you to read the story unhindered but also have the links/etc on the right hand side. If anything, I would make the background of the site a little bit darker so that the white background of the text area “pops”. Right now the background of the text area is of such a similar color to the background of the site that my eye gets very little definition between the two.
Thanks. I changed to a darker background. Does it look better now?
Much better! It’s easier to focus on the text since my eye doesn’t try to scroll all the way to the far sides of the screen while reading. Also, the more visible skulls coupled with your flat-eyed avatar stare really set the tone for the ‘misanthropic’ tone of your blog. Great changes
Also see my post at the bottom of the thread, I’m looking for some feedback too. Thank you!
themisanthropicmuse, I like your current layout; clean lines, easy on the eyes and a strong focus on your writing… I even love those skulls in the background because your color scheme is soothing. If anything else strikes me, I’ll let you know. Key is easy navigation and you have that.
Best wishes,
E
Thank you for taking the time to look over my layout. I think the more I look at it, the more I like it. It was so hard to pick one when there were several that I really liked. Have a lovely evening!
Ditto!
I’ve been having a lot of trouble in trying to find inspiration in what to write about so if anyone wants to give me some ideas i would greatly appreciate it or if there is something you want me to write about I would love to see what I can come up with.
Katlyn83,
What interests you? Why did you start blogging? You can start exploring those questions again and they should trigger some memory. The WordPress Daily Post offers tons of writing prompts. You can look at old prompts for ideas. Also, check out Plinky.com and SoulPancake.com. Another tip is to check out other blogs and read and comment on them… Some of my best topics have come from reading a blog post and getting into the subject that I then felt it merited a post from me. I have two blogs and have been writing what they call small stones on one of them. It is about paying attention to the world around you for slivers of ideas… it’s a great way to reconnect with the little things that prompt our creativity. So, look out the window, what do you see? Write about it and how it makes you feel… Just a small example and then go from there.
Best wishes,
E
thanks for the tips I will do that
I think you have great inspiration on your writing ideas and thoughts. The only thing I would suggest, is for inspiration, find a photo to go along with your writing if you can, it helps the brain of the viewer process your ideas, and it will also give you inspiration…if you don’t already have it. I have a tab called “behold my muse” which I started just that way, writing about the photo. I’m an amatuer photographer, so its easier, but even if all you do is a graphic in a paint program, instead of a title, it will liven up your site. So if you run out of things to write about, look around….photo’s are great muses. I also use another bloggers paintings as my muse, which she allows and likes, lol. she gets twice the hits, and so do I. good luck, you’re off to a great start!!!
thanks,photos never thought of that
After the last two Community Pools, I made quite a few changes on my site. While I think I’ve made it easier for existing readers to navigate the site and see features like my post card collection and travel planning posts, I am looking for feedback of how the site looks to first time visitors.
Can you automatically find what you are looking for? Is it inviting? Does the intro to each post on the main page make you want to read more?
Or is it cluttered / distracting? Does it overwhelm you and turn you away? Does it need more pictures or less? More text or less?
Thanks for your input, I really appreciate it!
http://WanderOneDay.com
Hi Wanderoneday,
I checked out your blog and the first tip I’d give as a reader is to place all your sidebar content on one side… all left or all right. It was a bit much to absorb visually with words and posts jumping at me… from all sides. Not a bad thing, but it would be a tad quieter if you moved them to the right. Your banner color is dense and heavy with way too much information. Limit the data and that should lighten things up a bit. A lighter shade might help too.
Best wishes,
E
Thanks for the suggestions. I’ll have to work on that, I’m not sure how much flexibility I have in my theme. But I do see what you mean about the dense/heavy banner.
I just read up on your theme Opti and the feel is like a magazine/blog appeal. You could look at other themes too and play around with a few. Otherwise, you can keep Opti if you like… Great!
Eliz
I do really like Opti, and would like to keep it. But their example sites are very clean-lined, so perhaps I should focus on what I actually include in my featured/widget side bars. I’m sure I could find a way to make them look less cluttered. Thanks for the suggestions!
Good idea!
Ok, I just checked out your blog and I’ll try and answer all your questions…
I like the theme you’ve picked. The background compliments your blog’s theme nicely and it looks terrific with the color scheme you’ve chosen.
I will be honest and say that I have never been a huge fan of three column layouts because they can take my focus away from the content of the blog but that is just my opinion. Some people love them and I don’t begrudge them the right to enjoy their widgets.
The intro to the posts on the main page are hits or misses for me. For example, since I like breweries I was instantly honing in on that post but Post Card #18: Cancun, A Fantasy City has a snippet that starts off a bit boring and if I were surfing, I’d go right by it.
Since your blog is about travel I’d pack it to the gills with beautiful pics. I didn’t see an overkill of text which is good. Some bloggers don’t get that most people aren’t looking to sit down and read an entire novel when reading blogs. For people with short attention spans like myself, the long ones cause me to disconnect unless it’s on a very riveting topic that has me in suspense.
I hope that helps
That was excellent, thank you! I recently switched to a theme that only shows short snippets of posts on the main page, whereas previously it was just one continuous scroll through all the posts (which was text overload). So now I need to focus on making the intros to the posts more eye-catching. Thanks for the suggestion!
wow that is alot, I felt like I was at a travel agency….sorry, but I was overwhelmed with info. I think you should limit your columns to two also, it’s just too much info at once. maybe make each post a bit bigger, the thumbnails just didn’t cut it, especially if you are taking the photo’s yourself, make em bigger…that’s what draws people in, not words. other than that, I can’t wait to go back and weed through it…lol just kidding, but I will go back and read Walls and Snoflakes and Daydreams, can’t wait to see the pics…bigger….
and PS…CLOUDS was spectacular!!!
I would like to make the photos bigger, but I’m frustrated by the limited control I have over themes. Perhaps one day soon I’ll get frustrated enough to pony up for the custom css design so I can adjust all that myself. And I’m working on making it less cluttered. Thanks for the suggestions!
Hope I wasn’t too harsh! I know finding the right theme is half the battle, I’m looking again too, even with dreading having to change everything again….but I don’t like mine either….lol take care and good luck!!!
Hi all, I have a quick question….I would love to find a free theme that is just like the one I am using now, but is expanded at least an inch or two more across my page….I seem to have alot of space on either side of my postings…..can someone please take a look at my blog and make a recommendation….and thanks in advance for your help.
Hi!!
I would love some more advice, suggestions or feedback of any type for my blog Little Letters. Comments on my theme and the overall appearance of my blog would also be great, as well as any constructive criticism on my writing.
Thanks!!!
http://mydiffer3nce.wordpress.com/
I really like the approach you have taken to your book reviews. I found them interesting particularly your post on Marlowe. Your opinions were easy to understand and i thought clearly set out.
As a suggestion from someone who is also a relatively new blogger it might be worth using the “more” button. That way you can skip through the posts easily to find one you are interested in more easily.
Any comments you have on my book review blog would also be appreciated http://www.browney237.com as it is so hard to get feedback.
All the best.
Thank you so much for your opinions and advice! I will be certainly take a look at your blog soon.
For starters, I love the title ‘little letters’ and the books to go with it! So lovely…
Thanks! I wasn’t quite sure of the name, but it’s nice to know that you like it.
It’s simply perfect… and it attracts curious eyes!
Good luck & much success!
Hey swimmers,
I want to create a submission page for my blog i.e. allow other bloggers to submit their own photos to my page. What would be the best way to do this/ can you with the free WordPress formats or do you need to pay for an expensive upgrade?
Furthermore, do you suggest creating a separate email account for posts? Is there a way to get some kind of integrated WordPress inbox with my blog?
Thanks for your help
I really like the approach you have taken to your book reviews. I found them interesting particularly your post on Marlowe. Your opinions were easy to understand and i thought clearly set out.
As a suggestion from someone who is also a relatively new blogger it might be worth using the “more” button. That way you can skip through the posts easily to find one you are interested in more easily.
Any comments you have on my book review blog would also be appreciated http://www.browney237.com as it is so hard to get feedback.
All the best.
Being fairly new to blogging, comments and feedback are helpful! Thanks!
Hey there! Also looking for some feedback! I’ve been blogging for almost 2 years, on pretty much anything related to expat parenting, life with the foreign service, raising third-culture children. It’s a travel blog, where I share our ‘visual perceptions’ of places we end up moving to… anyway, recently, I discovered that one can have more than one photo/image gallery as part of the same post… [I know, I'm probably a bit behind the curve!
] – and one could have slideshows AND circle galleries AND whatever other type of photo display… It’s the first time I packed a full trip in one post… some 45 images… AND THEY DON’T PACK THE POST! 
So, here is my kind request for your realistic feedback: ‘How does it look?’ All comments are welcome [including let's say... 'lady, you should move away from blogging, and try doing something else...':o] Thank you all in advance!
http://3rdculturechildren.com/2013/01/28/photo-journal-trip-to-copacabana-bolivia/
i still feel new and have much to learn so i’d like any advice. my first site is http://jubileejourney.wordpress.com. is there anything in the organization of the posts or the overall blog that could be improved. I’m hoping to engage my readers more.
I’m still getting the hang of WordPress and I recently added a tagline. Tell me what you think of the site as a whole or anything in particular you think could change/improve or what I should keep doing to help things move forward. Thanks!!
This is the second time I have had a pingback when doing a prompt…and when I look on the site it looks as though every entry was also…What is done with a pingback? Can they use it for some purpose? Diane
i’d love to get some general feedback on my ol’ blog….i’m trying to streamline my posts to be more about food, photography, illustrations, general lifestyle type stuff…..
thanks y’all!
silly me: http://www.thegranoladiaries.com
Hello, I like your cartoons. I have never been a fan of the three column layouts but that is a more personal thing, could well be because I am easily distracted and never know where to look on them. Maybe you could add a flickr feed (if you have a account) so peope can go look at more of your photos. I am going to try your wrap receipe, it sounds super tasty.
thanks for the feedback!
I wouldn’t mind any constructive feedback on my blog at http://StevenAChaparro.com. Thanks!
My blog is a rather niche one on heritage and stories of Delhi. While I have often heard the advantages of writing about topics of “local interest” I wonder if I have made this too narrow a readership segment. Any thoughts or past experiences on this would be very helpful.
Also would appreciate ideas to broaden the types of posts within this niche.
Thanks in advance everyone!
I am new to the blogosphere and would like any suggestions on my blog. I have planned to put up posts weekly. Kindly give your valuable feedback.
Thanks in advance!
I am new to the blogosphere and would like valuable suggestions, both on content and design. I plan to put up posts weekly.
Thanks in advance!!
I am new to the blogosphere and would like valuable suggestions, both on content and design. I plan to put up posts weekly.
Thanks in advance!!
I would really appreciate any constructive feedback on our travel blog, especially regarding the recent post. Trying a new blogging experience: asking readers to think about their comments, even before they begin reading thru the post – trying to deal with readers expectations, better saying…
Also, its the first time I’m trying different types of image galleries in the same post [tiled, circles, squares...]. Please, let me know how the whole idea is working out [or not!] to you… Thank you in advance! 
http://wp.me/p1oMvI-42q
my alter ego miss freaky p is still new at blogging and she fells a little bit helpless in this world.
so she look forward to get some comments on her new blog http://www.missfreakyp.wordpress.com
Thank you so much….love u
I have been doing blogs on and off for a while now, just me alone, with friends and family reading it getting upset because I told the truth and they didn’t like it. Anyway I did a very stupid thing while removing old data bases from my server, I clicked delete, with other things in my mind, I hit delete before ice ran through my veins, I realised that it was a year and a half of my life, photos, poems, muses gone.
I don’t swear much, but I made up for the years of not swearing. Anyway this time I have joined the WordPress gang, I used wordpress before but never knew that life outside the blog was as interesting as it is on wordpress.com.
You can have a look at my blog here. http://www.mysoresoul.co.uk enjoy.
…… bit of feed back would be nice please. 
My blog is pretty random….just as my thoughts are…. I have to say i value each coment someone as made on my blog….i started my blog to share my thoughts…and start random conversation….likes are great ….but comments are Amazing….. Happy blogging everyone…. If anyone has any thoughts on my blog please feel free to provide me any feedback good or bad….
I don’t usually publish blog posts that are written for my book, but I did here because I would love some feedback on the writing and if the post is something fresh, interesting, and in any way valuable. Thank you.
http://offgothepanties.com/2013/02/01/wading-out-to-the-deep-end/