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Weekly Writing Challenge: I Wish I Were

When we send a post into the blogosphere, we want to make sure our best feet are forward. That means making sure errors like typos or poor grammar don’t detract from what we have to say; it’s one of the reasons The Daily Post highlights common grammar struggles.  Grammar challenges follow up on grammar posts, calling on you to put your new-found understanding to the test.

To participate, tag your posts with “DPchallenge” or leave a link to your post in the comments. (It would also be great if you could link to this post to encourage people to take part – the more the merrier!) Please be sure your post has been specifically written in response to this challenge; obvious attempts to link-bait will be deleted. We’ll keep an eye on the tag and highlight some of our favorites on Freshly Pressed each Friday.


Last week, our grammar guru, Daryl, talked about the oft-mysterious subjunctive mood in If Hairs Be Wires, Black Wires Grow on Her Head. Use of the subjunctive mood isn’t as common in English as it is in other languages. I, for one, hadn’t even heard of the subjunctive tense until my first French class in middle school. (I blame the ’90′s hit song, I Wishwhat with its improper use of the subjunctive and all. “I wish I was a little bit taller”? Tsk, tsk.)

As Daryl mentioned in his post, the most common uses of the subjunctive mood in English are conditions, suppositions, wishes, demands, suggestions, and statements of necessity. At least once in our lives, we’ve all muttered, “I just wish I were…” or “If I were more like…”, knowingly or unknowingly invoking the subjunctive mood.

In honor of Daryl’s post, we ask you to finish the following sentence for this week’s writing challenge: “I wish I were.” Do you wish you were able to go back and visit that beautiful country you saw 10 years ago on vacation? Or do you wish you were more like a superhero and could reads minds as a special power? Or maybe you wish you were a famous writer, so you could share your voice with the world? (And if so, what would you want to say if you knew the world would listen?) The sky is the limit, so dream big and let us know what you wish for. Just don’t forget to use what we learned. It’s “I wish I were,” not “I wish I was”!

293 Comments
  1. This kept me awake last night.
    http://onsunnyside.wordpress.com/2012/10/30/i-wish-i-were/

    October 30, 2012
  2. I wish I were more outgoing: http://emmawolf.wordpress.com/2012/10/30/i-wish-i-were-more-outgoing/

    (was anyone else reminded of the song from Run Lola Run doing this week’s challenge? I couldn’t get it out of my head.)

    October 30, 2012
  3. kz #

    hi. this challenge is awesome. gives people a chance to look back and reflect. here’s mine ^^

    http://theeclecticeccentricshopaholic.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    October 30, 2012
  4. Following the hurricane news reports inspired this response. Not sure if we’re supposed to put our response link in the comments in addition to the DPChallenge tag, but just in case: http://travelgardeneat.com/2012/10/30/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/ ~ Kat

    October 31, 2012
  5. hope you don’t mind that mine is “I wish I had…” technically, I could have made it work utilizing “were,” but it would have been a bit messy for no other purpose than to have the word “were.”

    http://weebeebird.com/2012/10/31/i-wish-i-had-set-up-a-nanny-cam/

    October 31, 2012
  6. What a wonderful writing challenge. Here is my post: http://misserinterese.com/2012/10/30/i-wish-i-were-able/

    October 31, 2012
  7. Here is mine: http://shailsnest.com/2012/10/31/the-beginning/
    It is flash fiction with the ‘I wish I were’ incorporated into it :)

    October 31, 2012
  8. justxJosh #

    My post this week took me in a whole new direction that I wasn’t expecting. Brilliant topic this week, thanks Daily Post!

    http://justxjosh.com/2012/10/31/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    October 31, 2012
  9. Oh, how I wish I were a talented artist!
    http://madoqua.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/i-wish-i-were-a-talented-artist

    October 31, 2012
  10. There’s a first time for everything:
    Permalink: http://keepingitrealmom.com/2012/10/31/wish-i-were-a-…carving-guru-2/

    October 31, 2012
  11. “World Peace, Marital Bliss, and Blogging Fame–Not necessarily in that order”
    http://everydaygurus.com/2012/10/31/world-peace-marital-bliss-and-blogging-fame-not-necessarily-in-that-order/

    October 31, 2012
  12. First Weekly Writing Challenge. Here goes nothing!! http://un13reakableyear.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    October 31, 2012
  13. Inspired by Sandy, I wish I were…a hurricane!
    http://stilettomomma.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/i-wish-i-were-a-hurricane/

    October 31, 2012
  14. I’m a little late because Hurricane Sandy took our power – gotta love Starbucks WiFi!
    http://theretiringsort.com/2012/10/31/im-wishing/

    October 31, 2012
  15. Here’s my Weekly Writing Challenge for “I Wish I Were…”
    http://morningboyshowsthewater.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/if-debt-were-fat-obesity-inhabits-the-us/

    October 31, 2012
  16. This is what I ended up with. :-)

    http://sthetic.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/air/

    October 31, 2012
  17. Used for regret instead of wishing, https://rarasaur.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/i-wish-i-were-diabetic-2/

    October 31, 2012
  18. Hello!

    I want everyone to know how very happy I am to be a part of this community. Please read my entry here http://wp.me/p2zGQ7-ym.

    Thank you!
    KnowledgeKnut

    October 31, 2012
  19. It’s been a tiring day, tense and emotional. But after a happy ending – I wish I were in bed!
    Instead, I wrote my weekly challenge –
    http://talkaboutcheesecake.wordpress.com/2012/10/31/the-ultimate-desire/

    October 31, 2012
  20. I scattered a few subjunctive verb forms in this post: http://wrightonthebutton.com/2012/11/01/lest-we-seek-we-may-not-find/

    October 31, 2012
  21. Hey ! This is mine! Hope you all enjoy… :D
    http://entangledinparadox.wordpress.com/2012/11/01/i-wish-i-were/

    Thanks! :D

    November 1, 2012
  22. Here’s my response..A short fiction piece!
    http://perceptionsofareluctanthomemaker.wordpress.com/2012/11/01/dp-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    November 1, 2012
  23. Weekly Writing Challenge – ‘I wish I were’ http://knitnell.com/2012/11/01/crack-cocaine-of-the-craft-world/ ps I love the subjunctive, thank you so much for highlighting it – I usually quote “If I were a rich man” from ‘Fiddler on the Roof’ if the matter is ever being discussed….

    November 1, 2012
  24. I wish I were… Alright, I’ve got to cook up something fast! :)

    November 1, 2012
  25. In A Subjunctive Mood (or Long Live The Drama Queen)
    Weekly Writing Challenge
    http://verbatimgibberish.com/2012/11/01/in-a-subjunctive-mood-or-long-live-the-drama-queen/

    November 1, 2012
  26. Reblogged this on makowskipiotr1.

    November 1, 2012
  27. advocacine #

    Here’s one of my shortest post ever! http://advocacine.wordpress.com/2012/11/02/the-weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were-a-magician/

    November 1, 2012
  28. i thought i’d give it a try…
    http://wp.me/p1CSSV-4q

    November 1, 2012
  29. I wish I were able to teach people to spell definitely correctly! http://missmoiety.wordpress.com/2012/11/01/words-we-dont-know-how-to-spell/

    November 1, 2012
  30. What I wish I were….and what my those who love me wish I were. Interesting how those don’t always align. http://ridingthewavez.wordpress.com/2012/11/01/i-wish-i-were/

    November 1, 2012
  31. http://campariandsofa.com/2012/11/02/i-wish-i-were/
    camparigirl muses on a life well lived right where she is

    November 2, 2012
  32. VIP #

    Here’s my post on this weeks challenge

    http://psjustathought.wordpress.com/2012/11/02/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    November 2, 2012
  33. The “I Wish I Were . . . ” Game
    http://letterstodom.wordpress.com/2012/11/02/the-i-wish-i-were-game/

    November 2, 2012
  34. I hope it’s not too late to participate here. Please check my post! It would mean a lot to me.

    http://amaeguerrero.wordpress.com/2012/11/02/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    Much Love, Amae :)

    November 2, 2012
  35. Here is mine… this is just what came up when I was playing around with this topic :)
    http://worldofinkandyarn.wordpress.com/2012/11/02/i-wish-i-were-wp-writing-prompt/

    November 2, 2012
  36. i wish i could make a difference in the world! http://4ftphotoz.com/2012/11/02/1stpost/

    November 3, 2012
  37. http://nabielalala.wordpress.com/2012/11/04/weekly-wringing-challange-i-wish-i-were/

    as a student that fail in an exam i wish i were..

    November 4, 2012
  38. My I Wish I Were attempt is called Plug Me In I’m Ready. It’s a little off the wall but it is short too so relatively painless to read – I hope.

    November 4, 2012
  39. I wish I were a more fluid writer in this to me foreign language. Great to learn some grammar though, one day I might try and write my own respons to a writing challenge. Until then; good luck to all you merry writers out there! I learn from reading your posts.

    November 4, 2012
  40. I wrote a blog post using this grammar challenge. You can find it here….

    http://eis4em.wordpress.com/2012/11/04/in-a-nick-of-time-id-spend-it-with-my-father/

    I loved writing this, bringing back memories of my father. Play the YouTube video while you read. The music goes well with the writing.

    –Emily

    November 5, 2012
  41. I wish I am not to late… but better late than never :)
    http://enchantinghouri.wordpress.com/2012/11/05/weekly-writing-challenge-i-wish-i-were/

    November 5, 2012
  42. “I wish I were not what I am…not what I am not”. This week’s challenge worked my grey matter a little. Let me know your thoughts. http://toxicsweetyspensieve.wordpress.com/2012/11/06/i-wish-i-were-not-what-i-am-not-what-i-am-not/

    It has also inspired me to do a poem: http://toxicsweetyspensieve.wordpress.com/2012/11/06/be-not-afraid-to-be-you/

    November 6, 2012
  43. As with all the challenges I’ve done so far I wrote it and then totally failed to post it week of but it’s up now! http://behindthewillows.com/2012/11/08/i-wish-i-were/

    November 8, 2012

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