Weekly Writing Challenge: Easy As Pie
When we send a post into the blogosphere, we want to make sure our best feet are forward. That means making sure errors like typos or poor grammar don’t detract from what we have to say; it’s one of the reasons The Daily Post highlights common grammar struggles. Grammar challenges follow up on grammar posts, calling on you to put your new-found understanding to the test.
To participate, tag your posts with “DPchallenge” or leave a link to your post in the comments. (It would also be great if you could link to this post to encourage people to take part – the more the merrier!) Please be sure your post has been specifically written in response to this challenge; obvious attempts to link-bait will be deleted. We’ll keep an eye on the tag and highlight the week’s best posts on Freshly Pressed each Friday.
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Last week, erudite resident grammarian Daryl posted an introduction to metaphor and simile, two tools that can add detail and texture to your communication–we often use them in writing and speech to drive home an impression we’re trying to create.
Of course, whether we’re using these tools as thoughtfully as we might is another issue: consider the gulf between your declaration that “it’s hot as hell out here” and Shakespeare’s evocative description of Romeo’s feelings for Juliet.
Your challenge this week is fairly straightforward as far as rules go: write about whatever you’d like, incorporating metaphor and/or simile to illustrate and highlight important parts of your story. If you’d like something more advanced, take the bull by the horns and attempt an epic simile, an extended simile that runs for several lines. Homer really liked a good epic simile, so much so that we now call them Homeric Similes; here are a few examples.
One thing to keep in mind: a good metaphor or simile doesn’t have to be flowery or formal–you should use your own frame of reference while crafting them. Similes and metaphors are mirrors of your natural tone, they can be as flowery as your great-aunt’s sofa or as dirty as the sole of a trucker’s boot. (See what I did there? Ba-da-bing!) There’s no need to be someone you’re not; the “write what you know” adage applies here as well.
As always, feel free to ask questions in the comments; if anyone would like Daryl to expand on any piece of his post, we’ll rope him in. We’re excited to see what you come up with for such a wide-open challenge!
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Just added the DP tag to my post today since ironically it applies. Thank you for these challenges. I enjoy participating and reading what others create as well.
I did the same as well comparing life to puzzle pieces!
http://theinfamousl.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/life-in-pieces/
Oh my goodness! I have a post sitting in my drafts comparing life to a jigsaw puzzle. You beat me to it
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That’s great! I hope you can help me – I have followed the instructions to no avail for how to get the 2012 Postaday Badge. ?? Thanks
I don’t actually have the badge on my site because I don’t post every day. Good luck!
I also had a post today with a metaphor today!!! Thanks for looking!
http://motherhoodisanart.com/2012/10/01/you-have-a-broken-heart/
Oh my god, I just posted something yesterday that would be GREAT for this challenge. Can I repost today, or reblog it with new tags? Please let me know, I would love to have a shot!
http://righttobitch.com/2012/09/30/the-fruitless-pursuit-of-an-anonymous-hacker/ Here it is!
Hi I thought I would repost this as my first attempt on the weekly challenge. Its already been posted in my poetic endeavors section on my blog.
http://poeticcreole.wordpress.com/2012/09/23/30/
http://icescreammama.com/2012/09/16/pick-me-up/
O, Scribe, take the key . . . unlock the door . . . http://delanasworld.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/weekly-writing-challenge-easy-as-pie/
This poem, filled with metaphors and simile’s was written long back, but no one ever saw it because I was not at all active in WordPress the even though I published it then. I neither did have any followers then, nor did have any writing challenge! So, I guess this time, the poem should see the outer world!
Here is it — http://wp.me/p1z4hZ-B
My post / response to the challenge is about a meathead college guy using metaphor while still sounding semi-tough (medium rare).
btw: http://ungratefulbliss.com/2012/10/01/apricots/
Grandpapa Llewellyn had a great simile. I recall him saying after a bath, “Why you look as clean as a spanked baby’s behind.”
I believe that my post today qualifies and would love a leg-up! Thanks so much!!
http://thrufresheyes.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/if-for-only-a-moment/
done! thanks
http://bodhisattvaintraining.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/weekly-writing-challenge-easy-as-pie/
Here’s the latest from featherglass: the magazine:
http://featherglass.com/2012/10/02/la-dolce-vita/
I hope you enjoy reading it!
Well, I doubt Shakespeare would be impressed, but I took a whack at it. Any feedback is welcome. And cheers to everyone who tried this.
http://mouseintokyo.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/the-big-mikan/
Do you have a Spanish version of these challenges?
Not right now – would you like to help us start one?
Yes, why not? I know perfect Ingles and Spanish I wouldn’t mind helping…
Hi this is the first time I have entered anything of this sort! It is a small section of a novel I am writing
http://booksdefineme.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/weekly-writing…ge-easy-as-pie/
http://bluerosegirl08.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/day-173-george-c-scott-charles-dickens-and-me-or-how-ebenezer-scrooge-taught-me-a-lesson-in-grammar/ as always comments are welcome
Here’s mine…”On writing”
http://medlenalia.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/on-writing/
Always make sure the similes you use apply to the character’s perspective you’re writing from. An older woman probably isn’t going to see something as being ‘like that elusive last Pokemon card.’ It wouldn’t fit. Keep in tone with the rest of the post.
here is my entry – http://maryrosemaharlikapalmares.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/
it is making me happy how much doing these weekly challenges is helping me to write some fun stuff – for me for sure and hopefully for others – my attempt this week is titled “What’s a meta for?” and has to do with leading horses to water [but not making them throw stones in glass houses because of all the admin involved] – hope you enjoy and would love to make it on the list – http://brettfish.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/whats-the-meta-for/
http://icescreammama.com/2012/09/25/thar-she-blows-2/
oh this was fun
here tis mine 
http://the-serenity-space.com/2012/10/02/weekly-writing-challenge-easy-as-pie/
http://overwhelmedbyjoy.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/it-can-always-always-always-get-worse/
i’m not sure I used metaphors, and I rarely write something, but here
http://ruthrutherford.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/the-perpetual-babysitter/
“For those who don’t know, babysitting is a big deal for young girls. It’s a rite of passage. We are Santiago, babysitting is our very own giant marlin. And in that Gulf Stream of suburban New Jersey, I reeled that marlin in with skill and ease.”
Thanks for reading!
http://blgit.wordpress.com/
* wwwc- daily post
I wrote this post after reading the article on metaphor and simile, but before the challenge was announced.
http://suesconsideredtrifles.wordpress.com/2012/09/29/understanding-speaking-terms-part-7-2/
Willing to post as a racehorse at the gate:
http://irvent.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/dpchallenge-mine-is-easy-as-pie/
I combined the DPchallenge & weekly photo challenge for a story about selfish knitting and valuing one’s self : http://joyfulwise.com/2012/10/02/mine/
I just added the DPChallenge tag to my post, “Finding Hope in a Boxing Ring.” I came across this challenge just after writing this post, and found that it applies. Here, I showcase a boxing gym that represents a whole lot more than jabbing and sparring.
http://mangomornings.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/finding-hope-in-a-boxing-ring/
Just realized my post was filled with metaphors and similes and the like, though I wasn’t consciously trying to do so.
http://rooktopia.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/photo-cosmic-sunset/
my attempt…
http://nephiriel.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/the-bond-of-generations/
This may well be against some unspoken rule, but hey its not law set in stone or not that I have seen any codex of blog morality. Therefore I am linking a second to this challenge… http://poeticcreole.wordpress.com/2012/09/26/red-man-mythos-2/
http://houseofxen.wordpress.com/2012/09/30/lyrical-analysis-dlz-by-tv-on-the-radio/
This is a lyrical analysis of “DLZ” by TV on the Radio just published two days ago and it is revolves around metaphor and simile in the song. Spent a lot of time writing this, please consider viewing and I promise you won’t be disappointed.
I hope you will consider my submission for the DP Challenge:
http://somestolenmoments.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/today-is-gray/
I look forward to comments.
Bipolar Octopus.
http://thoughtsofalunatic.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/i-am-a-bipolar-octopus/
Here’s one that’s somewhat on point: An explanation of the metaphor in my site name for the people (and machines) who take it literally.
http://kingdomofsharks.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/google-doesnt-get-idioms/
pdchallenge
It was a deluge of iterations and reiterations, like waves crashing against a rock in and out, in and out, as he tried to firce his ideas into my head like a rock climber searching for the tiny crack to wiggle his fingers into so as to climb and cling like a tenacious lichen, smothering me.
I’ve tried this technique once or twice before, maybe better, but here’s mine done for this challenge – a reflection on the “seasons” of life…
http://theretiringsort.com/2012/10/02/to-every-thing-there-is-a-season/
I’m feeling really bad about this, but have extreme writers block, being confronted with this much freedom in a challenge… So, I decided to submit a preliminary post, one which I find is the most metaphorical thing I can think of
http://flusenkopp.wordpress.com/2012/09/30/potentials/
Reblogged this on I WIN.
Here’s my DP Challnge; In the footsteps of Hermann Hesse. Enjoy:
http://stevescribble.com/2012/10/03/in-the-footste…-hermann-hesse/
Ok, so my first link didn’t work for the WP challenge, so second time lucky! In the footsteps of Hermann Hesse:
http://stevescribble.com/2012/10/03/in-the-footsteps-of-hermann-hesse/
My post from yesterday fits the grammar requirement today.
http://welcometograndcentral.com/2012/10/01/who-me-ketchup-with-us-prompt-3/
for people who don’t know “easy as a pie” mean what ^^ http://tienganhdongian.wordpress.com/2012/09/26/as-easy-as-piea-piece-of-cake/
I wrote this yesterday about girls being either Toyotas or Lamborgheni’s. (There are two purposeful errors in grammer in this post, sorry English buffs.)
http://deepandwonderfulthoughts.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/toyotas-and-lamborghenis/
Oh I have the perfect one for this!! Post to come!
Ok. I’m in! “Slowly I Turned” – Niagara Falls. http://breezybooksblog.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/slowly-i-turned/
Will do this as soon as I find a free second to even write a post! More than usual, I’m feeling like there needs to be more hours in the week!
Here’s my entry. I had fun writing this!
http://perceptionsofareluctanthomemaker.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/dp-challenge-the-whole-nine-yards/
I have a question. When I put the link to this page in my post, how can I get it to say “here” instead of copying the URL?
Eda, you can use some basic HTML to turn your text into a iink.
Here’s how!
It worked! Thanks, Michelle. I feel so sophisticated and I think I just grew an inch.
You’re my hero!
I am rising to the challenge! Having written about getting words correct when giving a presentation or giving a talk while using a screen, chalkboard, etc, I could hardly refuse this one.
Try me on
https://chickerellchirper.wordpress.com
My simile of the week was posted in the comments section when
If this library computer will allow me to edit and finish, my metaphor of the week was to describe 1950′s Britain as ‘spuds and gravy in monochrome’.
A+mazing, Bryan!
Bang on for 1950′s Britain and it made me smile.
For those who remember – or want to know more about – the atmosphere of 1950′s and 60′s Britain I post a link to ‘A Ramble Around My Aunt’ http://bryanhemming.wordpress.com/434-2/
A prize to those who can get past the first few paragraphs. The prize being the next lot of paragraphs.
The title is intended to be both metaphorical and a pun on the word ramble. It also pays homage to the great autobiographical play by John Mortimer, which was turned into a Teleplay starring Laurence Olivier as the playwright’s father. Loved it!
It made me smile, too! Great description!
Hi there,
Check out the Description of my “Ism” category on my blog.
http://tarynsplace.wordpress.com/category/ism/
http://lokendrakc2009.wordpress.com/
http://skepticchristian.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/humour-and-christianity/
Here’s mine. I find the title of the challenge quite fitting: http://lastnorthboundtrainhasgone.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/weekly-writing-challenge-easy-as-pie/
Hi, this is a poem i wrote some days ago that i think applies to this
, hope you like it ^^ http://mistikelf.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/pain-for-my-valentine/
My role in this entire house-project is to be the person who leaps out in front of the train. High-kicking and wearing a marching-band outfit and playing the tuba and tying myself to the tracks.
Renovating our 1890 Victorian.
Metaphors and a little bit of Will S. This was written after meeting up with an old friend that I had a terrible crush on to discover that he had become crushed by the material world and was now obsessed with money and little else.
http://wp.me/p2CjcG-kb
Wrong link! Sorry! Here is the right one:http://wp.me/s2CjcG-crushed
There’s a lonely simile and one metaphor in my latest golf post. I tried to bury them like a Bubba Watson drive into the deep rough.
http://how-to-break-100.blogspot.com/2012/10/the-mental-game-of-golf-let-positive.html
I did something very similar for the imitation challenge by comparing a heart to a glass object http://justifythemargins.wordpress.com/2012/09/14/voices/ (sorry! I just don’t have time this week to write :cc)
hi.
http://mmwipowazna.wordpress.com/
i revamped mine a little by playing around with the graphics which i think make it a little more accessible and relateworthy… still an area of the blogging i need to get better at a lot – let me know what you think – http://brettfish.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/whats-the-meta-for
I never metaphor I didn’t like. Check it out at http://charlieray45.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/weekly-writing-challenge-easy-as-pie-fighting-the-culture-war/
This post is a little older, but I did the extended metaphor thing here in my humor blog. Check it out, and comment if you want.
http://wp.me/s1pVUE-ramen1
Appreciating another writer’s metaphor, and adding some of my own.
http://fiveuninterruptedminutes.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/virginia-lee-burton-and-the-long-ribbon-of-time/
It was fun thinking of my life in a new way through metaphors in this post:
http://princessonamission.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/metaphorically-what-is-a-dairy-princess/
Hmm I think that my post today qualifies. http://sula1968.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/orphan-time/
Are we allowed to do more than one, here is another http://sula1968.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/the-winter-of-my-content/
http://plaridel.wordpress.com/2012/10/01/love-is-like-the-wind/
what is that about? http://theblogappleguide.blogspot.com/2012/10/new-york-is-known-for-being-expensive.html
I’ve never tried a DPchallenge before…but I did put some similes and metaphors in my post…http://starwarsanon.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/clone-wars-season-5-premiere/
Ok. First time ever doing this and terrified. I am not a writer but I love to write. I had to google ‘simile’ before I wrote this so I really hope I have managed it. Just a short verse that I hope can mean different things to different people depending on where they are in their lives.
http://winedrinkingmummy.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/submit-to-you-2/
http://theblogappleguide.blogspot.com/2012/10/new-york-is-known-for-being-expensive.html
http://readmepatti.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/i-never-promised-you-a-rose-garden/
Who knew my first post ever would ironically also fit into this category.
http://barkthis.com/2012/10/02/time-to-rake-the-eaves/
I am glad to be able to join this time.
Here’s mine : http://mywordwall.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/oh-little-daisy/
Thanks for the prompt.
I don’t think I got the idea of this challenge last time so I’m trying again. I decided to stick to my them of ‘Giving a presentation or talk’ but have used descriptions of types in an attempt at metaphor.
Find my attempt on Oct 3 at http://chickerellchirper.wordpress.com
Oh, everyone loves metaphors, don’t they? Here’s mine:
http://applehillcottage.org/2012/10/03/27-door-1-the-price-is-right/
(Thanks for a good challenge!)
Thanks for participating!
http://lightwithmatch.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/temptation-trumps/
In honor of Francis of Assisi, I composed a rough draft of a canticle featuring metaphors and similes….
http://bonaventure1274.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/the-creation-responds-to-francis-with-a-canticle/
Simile and metaphor: is it easy as pie? http://beingspecial.org/2012/10/04/simile-and-metaphor-easy-as-pie/
And here’s my entry:
http://thebestofalexandra.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/metaphors-and-similes-and-other-things-you-dont-need-at-welding-school/
the scheduling didnt work, so had to re-post it. Simile and Metaphor: easy as pie? http://beingspecial.org/2012/10/04/simile-and-metapho-easy-as-pie/
Hehehe…
http://wanderingvoiceless.com/2012/10/03/weekly-writing-challenge-how-great-thou-art-sleep/
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haha
http://winedrinkingmummy.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/she/
My favorite simile has always been this line from the videogame Soul Reaver: “My once-proud kin, wiped from this world like excrement from a boot.”
Anyway, I came up with a good metaphor while walking my dog, and I’ll be sure to put that into a post tonight!
And it’s up now! http://drewpan.wordpress.com/2012/10/05/pee-or-get-off-the-tree/
I love a good metaphor.
http://becomingcliche.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/its-debatable/
Here’s mine.
http://sunsandstarsanddreams.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/competent-dentists-are-they-extinct/
Please do read. Comments and criticism are welcomed, but please don’t judge too harshly because it is the first time I am attempting something like this.
Where can I create a link next time? Please critique my post. All I can do is learn!
“DPchallenge” I came to a fork in the road as I often I do and sometimes not, I decided to take the opportunity to hedge my bet this fair morning. Not deciding betwixt the two roads I thought to compromise.
I headed down the road to my left and met a ghastly and dreadful sight, like a dream that started out well and turned for the worst. I quickly took flight, a homing pigeon flight, and returned to the fork in the road. After I was well rested, I headed down the road to my right.
I came upon a place of pure beauty right out of paradise lost, but without the serpent of old more cunning than all of Eden. The serpent even more cunning than the other animals. They were cunning as well but to a lesser degree.
Not to be satisfied with Eden as humans are, but true to my choice of compromise, I headed again down the road to my left to the ghastly and dreadful sight. Undaunted I past the ghastly and dreadful sight only to end in paradise lost again.
It is without saying, “When it comes to a fork in the road, I’ll just end up in the same place at a different time.” I have no choice?
I hadn’t intended to write in metaphor today, but sometimes it happens…
http://thegoodvillager.com/2012/10/04/when-the-books-cover-is-shirtless-and-toothless/
A poem about a hummingbird and my young daughter–and the transience (and beauty) of life:
http://lonnalisawilliams.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/weekly-writing-challenge-metaphor-and-simile/
Great challenge. I’m a sucker for a good metaphor. Here’s my attempt: http://postcardfiction.com/2012/10/04/weekly-writing-challenge-sculpted/
I’m new to this blogging thing, but I figured I would give it a shot. Feel free to leave your impressions.
http://karmakat24.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/24/
This is my first Writing Challenge entry. I hope to participate frequently in the future. I think it is fun having a challenge put forth to conquer.
http://grannyslittleprojects.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/poem-about-loss-soft-monkey/
Here’s my two cents: http://stacitroilo.com/2012/10/04/how-to-build-a-better-story/