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Weekly Writing Challenge: Easy As Pie

When we send a post into the blogosphere, we want to make sure our best feet are forward. That means making sure errors like typos or poor grammar don’t detract from what we have to say; it’s one of the reasons The Daily Post highlights common grammar struggles.  Grammar challenges follow up on grammar posts, calling on you to put your new-found understanding to the test.

To participate, tag your posts with “DPchallenge” or leave a link to your post in the comments. (It would also be great if you could link to this post to encourage people to take part – the more the merrier!) Please be sure your post has been specifically written in response to this challenge; obvious attempts to link-bait will be deleted. We’ll keep an eye on the tag and highlight the week’s best posts on Freshly Pressed each Friday.
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Last week, erudite resident grammarian Daryl posted an introduction to metaphor and simile, two tools that can add detail and texture to your communication–we often use them in writing and speech to drive home an impression we’re trying to create.

Of course, whether we’re using these tools as thoughtfully as we might is another issue: consider the gulf between your declaration that “it’s hot as hell out here” and Shakespeare’s evocative description of Romeo’s feelings for Juliet.

Your challenge this week is fairly straightforward as far as rules go: write about whatever you’d like, incorporating metaphor and/or simile  to illustrate and highlight important parts of your story. If you’d like something more advanced, take the bull by the horns and attempt an epic simile, an extended simile that runs for several lines. Homer really liked a good epic simile, so much so that we now call them Homeric Similes; here are a few examples.

One thing to keep in mind: a good metaphor or simile doesn’t have to be flowery or formal–you should use your own frame of reference while crafting them. Similes and metaphors are mirrors of your natural tone, they can be as flowery as your great-aunt’s sofa or as dirty as the sole of a trucker’s boot. (See what I did there? Ba-da-bing!) There’s no need to be someone you’re not; the “write what you know” adage applies here as well.

As always, feel free to ask questions in the comments; if anyone would like Daryl to expand on any piece of his post, we’ll rope him in.  We’re excited to see what you come up with for such a wide-open challenge!

222 Comments
  1. Spiced Cider — How Do Ya Like Them Apples? Let me know what you think. http://wp.me/p2o6Lp-fK

    October 4, 2012
  2. Sometimes metaphors are not exactly what they seem. And other times they are. Here is my post: “Remember? I Plugged Your Meter”: http://offgothepanties.com/2012/10/04/remember-i-plugged-your-meter/

    October 4, 2012
  3. Since I read this article and started thinking about the challenge, I have noticed every single metaphors and simile, either spoken or written. It is a bit like buying a red car, then suddenly noticing how many other red cars there are on the road. :)

    October 4, 2012
    • I like what you wrote.. I nodded my head and began to think even beyond this thought. My favorite metaphor is and please don’t be offended, “I don’t know what I met-a-phor and I don’t know what har-ass-ment.” It can also met-him-phor and his-ass-ment. I had this thought when sexual harassment became an issue on the job.. Previously this preceded dating and courting. Only the male bosses were guilty of sexual harassment. That is how women got a promotion. This was well know by women and they chided women who got promotions doing sexual favors.

      October 4, 2012
      • My deeply-rooted feminist principles remain intact, despite your play on words. There is, however, a big difference between a person choosing to grant sexual favours with a view to being promoted, and being on the receiving end of unwelcome sexual advances from those who hold more power within an organisation. And, um, anyone can be guilty of – or a victim of – sexual harrassment.

        October 4, 2012
      • Thank you for responding.
        My play on words, yes anyone can the victim of sexual harassment. My concern is for those that want a date, leading to courtship, not withstanding the other two reasons. I have witnessed women outside of work proclaiming the doctrine of sexual harassment which is sad to see.

        Because of the indoctrination on the job how can they expect to get a mate. Eventually they have to talk about sex maybe have sex. Personally I don’t want a woman who is afraid to act all woman and who doesn’t like sex. For that matter I’m a strong supporter of premarital sex. With the new rules on marriage and divorce I refuse to get married under man but under God like Adam and Eve. I have been married twice. when I have a woman I treat her like a wife. When we depart I still have all my things.

        Thanks for the opportunity to express my views.

        October 6, 2012
  4. :] http://ooplalund.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/weekly-writing-challenge-mind-the-gap-ooplalund/ Can’t help but think of simile as ‘smilies’ :x

    October 4, 2012
    • Similes often do makes us smile. If we had to think of a simile every time we made a smiley, I think there would be a lot few smilies. Luckily, we don’t have to. :) :)

      October 4, 2012
  5. Hi Everyone!

    Here is my submission http://wp.me/p2zGQ7-n8 – my head hurts – LOL :-)

    KnowledgeKnut

    October 4, 2012
  6. I can’t wait to read what others have come up with. I found this challenge to be a little difficult – I used an idiom to come up with the topic instead of the other way around. :)

    http://thinkbigmuch.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/on-birds-in-the-hand/

    October 4, 2012
  7. This week I’m submitting 2 posts for this challenge (may to compensate for last week’s no participation)
    http://wp.me/pxKCz-dV
    http://wp.me/pxKCz-e1

    October 4, 2012
  8. This was fun!

    October 4, 2012
  9. This will make you smile – cause you probably thought of it too.
    http://piecesofmyrandomness.wordpress.com/2012/10/02/the-mystery-of-bruises-unsovled/

    October 4, 2012
  10. Ok….I did it. Was a bit challenging but its good as gold now :)
    http://joykeeney.wordpress.com/

    October 4, 2012
  11. Hi Friends

    Here is my submission http://lunadu.wordpress.com/

    October 4, 2012
  12. I wrote, “About a Book” on http://calientewoman.wordpress.com.

    October 5, 2012
  13. Exciting challenge! Here’s my entry. Hope you’ll read it. :)

    http://cherylsalvador.wordpress.com/2012/10/05/the-rise-and-fall/

    October 5, 2012
  14. Hi! Here’s my entry for this week’s challenge!

    As soon as I read about Homer and epic similes, I knew exactly what I had to write about. I just came back from what I kept referring to as an “epic adventure” — a 9-day hiking trip that really tested my mind and physicial capacity to the limit! I felt like every day we were waging a war. Really, the hardest thing I’ve ever done! Enjoy :)

    http://yourdailydoseblog.com/2012/10/05/the-hardest-thing-ive-ever-done/

    October 5, 2012
  15. windowtoindia75 #

    This article is a bit unusual and its a work of fiction that I hope will be entertaining enough to read all the way through. I have tried to take the idea to a new level, with the entire article itself being a simile Please comment/critique on what you liked/disliked.

    http://windowtoindia.wordpress.com/2012/10/05/the-last-stand/

    October 5, 2012
  16. For some reason my entry, “One Twinkle at a Time,” is not showing up on the DP feed. The link is http://reinventingtheeventhorizon.wordpress.com/2012/10/04/one-twinkle-at-a-time-what-memoir-the-mafia-and-haiti-have-in-common/
    Thanks,
    Kathy

    October 5, 2012
    • Kathryn, it looks like you inadvertently included a period after “DPchallenge” in your tags – that’s probably the culprit!

      October 5, 2012
  17. A dinner guest…
    http://dreamydunes.wordpress.com/

    I think I’m late, but rather late than never! For the metaphor/simile DPchallenge….

    October 5, 2012
  18. A bit late, but thought I’d share mine anyway :) It’s about graffiti.
    http://becomingaussie.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/like-typography-on-steroids/

    October 6, 2012
  19. I seem to be always running late these days, but here’s “The Weather Report.” http://janetsunderland.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/the-weather-report/

    October 6, 2012
  20. Late but can’t hurt to post anyway! “Why women still remember that thing you said two years ago”:
    https://cruelladekill.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/why-women-still-remember-that-thing-you-said-two-years-ago/

    October 6, 2012
  21. I’m trying…but it’s not a permanent condition, I’m told. Thankfully, my friends and family are gracious. Here’s my input: http://remissionary.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/easy-as-pie/

    October 6, 2012
  22. At the eleventh hour, here is my contribution.
    http://wp.me/p1vqRI-bi

    October 7, 2012
  23. Is it too late yet? :) I’m new at this, so here’s my first entry: http://littledawns.wordpress.com/2012/10/07/as_i_move_myself_out_of_your_sight/

    October 7, 2012
  24. Here is my entry… It took all week long to creat it and when you read it, you’ll see why. It was the most insanely fun week ever!

    http://mycrazyaustralianlife.wordpress.com/2012/10/08/easy-as-pie-who-are-you-kidding/

    October 7, 2012
  25. This little ditty came to mind this morning. I have submitted it late for your review. Believe or not it is true! This is my second post on metaphors and similes. I consider it to be a beautiful challenge. I love creative writing.

    “DPchallenge” I am against marriage as we know it today. I followed her to school one day, I married her, and she fleeced me white as snow. A fool and his money is soon parted so I followed her to the Church one day, married her and she fleeced me white as snow. Not to be outdone the next time I was no fool and I did not marry her. Boy, which was a marriage made in heaven. True to marriage after it ended my female apartment manager fleeced me white as snow.

    October 8, 2012
  26. I really like that, but now I cant participate.

    October 9, 2012

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